| "Dreams of Intergrity." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(nsi) On: January 02, 2006 13:08 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is great!!! Although...can you PLEASE hurry up and kill Naraku!!?? lol j/k I was wondering though...on the other chapter when Naraku had captured Kouga and the gang was rescuing him...why didnt Kagome change into her demon form and release Kouga?? Just wondering...PLEASE update soon!!
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Title: o my that was great
Reviewed By: KAGS1 On: December 31, 2005 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAATS AN GREAT STORY SOO FAR PLS UPDATE SOON.
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Reviewed By: AC On: December 20, 2005 18:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I find this poorly written. There are so many grammer mistakes, and the dream idea of getting Kags and Sess together is overused. Really, get a beta reader, and you may be able to salavage this debacle. but I doubt it.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Darks_lil_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is overall good but you really gotta speed it up and get some more chapters but hey you're doing good for your first fan fic I don't right any because i don't have time but i do read and review thought! ^^ anyway are you gonna change kags in anyway like maybe her true form is hidden or something and only Sess can break the curse after there mated or something like that... anyway keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 19:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I like your story, please update soon!
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