| "Mated" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: bleeding Kami
Reviewed By: DBZ Maniac On: April 16, 2004 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
What kind of shit fic was that honestly Goku is inocent but not the inocent come on how do u think Goten was conceived he even told him 2 stay theit sheesh Goku still has saiyan instincts but ur lucky ive read worst soz 2 dig in2 u like that but i didn't enjoy at all
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Reviewed By: Saiyda On: February 19, 2003 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best ChiChi and Goku fan fic Ive read. Not to raunchy but just the right amount of steam. Goku is so adorable in this story. |
Reviewed By: Jonathan_Landstander On: June 03, 2002 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good, Amy. Kudos. |
Reviewed By: **friezas girl** [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2002 00:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay.....that was..uh..interseting*Looks around*Frieza were are you?~_^ |
Reviewed By: I LOVE GOKU!!!!!! On: February 08, 2002 00:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I WISH I WAS CHICHI!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2002 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! I didn't think anyone make a lemon that damn innocent! |
Reviewed By: Neconecopoohs On: February 02, 2002 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and once again it is I!!! THE TERRIBLE NECONECOPOOHS!!! KAWAII!!! I wish I was Chichi ;-; write more!!! |
Reviewed By: Rockstar Freeza On: February 02, 2002 17:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Typical......I knew this lemon was going to be too good. *walks off to take a cold shower and sit on some ice for awhile* |
