Title: *pounce* Reviewed By:DeathsAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:09 CDT Comment/Review: I will not rate your writing because I do not believe it needs it! Numbers can be false as apposed to opinion. I love your story, not only because I am an absolute fan of The Demon Ororon but also because you did a great job writing it! I found a few spelling errors but you did a fantastic job wording it like things are worded in the manga itself! Which I found really cool! Great job! I don't know how you could continue it, but please either write more or write another one! Your great! =^.^=