| "Gentle Lesson: The Restoration of the Hatake" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Kayto On: May 14, 2007 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I was really nervous about the m/m pairing, but the way you present your story everthing balances out very well. I can't wait to read the finish.
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Reviewed By: ricecracker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 22:18 CDT
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Shockingly good. All the relationships flow so well, whether it's co-dependent or amenable, or between close friends or acquaintances. I applaud the author for making such a deep and complex story off of Masashi Kishimoto's already uniquely twisted manga.
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Reviewed By: vesper On: April 22, 2007 02:54 CDT
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I really love the story that you have going on, and how you go back and forth between the present and past. Please finish
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore this story! It's creative and it's very nice to see a story that focuses on Kakashi. You're an excellent writer. You pace yourself well and you just hit the nail on the head with everyone's character. I really don't know what to say except that this is an amazing story and I hope you choose to continue sometime.
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Title: Boo! It's Melissa Norvell
Reviewed By: Oneesan no Miroku Houshi (not logged in) On: June 02, 2006 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't feel like logging in here, but I just wanted to say hello, KakashiIdiot! Nice to see that you're here too! So am I under the name Oneesan no Miroku Houshi! No matter where this story is, I still love it! Hope to see an update soon from you!
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Reviewed By: 3Jane [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very well done; your characterization of Kakashi is sensitive but honest. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of your story!
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Reviewed By: Mireillesbees [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story. I love the way you potray Kakashi. He'so broken. I can't wait to see if the team can save him. Please continue. This really is a great story.
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Reviewed By: 3Jane [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story; intensely visual. Good insights into the characters - I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: cailee On: February 04, 2006 10:24 CST
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This is soooo good. Your characterization, the mood and tone is so tenuously but deliciously balanced........Please continue to write. You do have an ending in mind, no? The trouble with most would-be writers is that they think they must feel 'inspired' to write. Not so! Good writing stems from meticulous organization and planning. Not so different from writing an essay. So have an ending in mind as you continue to write. I'm only being so didactic because I want you to finish this wonderful story!
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