| "Predator and Prey" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent story, but i feel many might be put off by the lack of paragraphing and punctuation, in short its difficult to read here.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Shadow_of_a_doubt On: July 22, 2006 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Simply put, it's amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: SWEET
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 16:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
KEEP GOING!!
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Title: kick ass
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is awsome dude keep addign mo
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Reviewed By: jkfm On: November 12, 2005 08:24 CST
Comment/Review:
how can he be naked? he doesnt even wear clothes! :)
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