| "Ranma: Ascension" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: athenais [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it. how about fusing the male and female of ranma back together. it somehow distrubs me . i liked it really very well but after this part with seperation of the two halves. the story was going down in the abyss. i think they are need to go back together, if not they will die. maybe ranko can be frightend of ranma and not want that. and ranma may have his genderchaning curse, but let him have controll and don't forget the family reunion you planed. you have lot about to write, if you only think about it. nekoko visting her clan and present her adopted son ranma to the tribe and such thinks. genma trying to unite the schools and such. i missed shampoo, ukyou, ryouga and other people. what about ranma yagami blood or royal jurian blood? let him meet maybe tenchi or iori. sailor pluto getting creeps because of ranmas chaos and the sister weapon to the silence glaive. makoto and minako chasing him and a lot more.there are lot of things you can write about. so please update.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: November 04, 2003 20:36 CST
Comment/Review:
It's great, please continue.
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Reviewed By: Korax [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was running great thill ya got to the part where you spilt them with the tao.
Now i have no idea where the hell your taken this. |
Reviewed By: Prae On: June 10, 2003 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this story abandoned? |
Reviewed By: ryuuken On: August 23, 2002 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story upload new chapter |
Reviewed By: animefan On: May 02, 2002 04:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, please, please upload a new chapter????
Your story is so interesting, that cliffhangers leave us desperately pestering the author.
ahem. Your story is quite good. please continue. |
Reviewed By: the DragonBard On: February 24, 2002 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Neat.
Glad to see you used some of my ideas.
Three things:
1: should have scenes where girls (female faeries, elementals, goddesses, demonesses, etc) are chasing after Ranma.
2: An attack capable of making a SSJ envious would require the enough power to destroy a solar system.
3: You should make a comment that either Ranma is making sure that his magical attacks area of effect is being kept just to the planet, or that his spells are weaker than his ki attacks.
Just some ideas. |
Reviewed By: Oreana Date [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2002 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
see how rude some people are?! 292 visits and only FOUR reviews!!! i tell ya! THE NERVE!! i personally think it's really good! especially when you bring all these characters in the mix! ^^ sorry-i just like seeing all the characters come together sometimes. |
Reviewed By: Lord Void On: February 17, 2002 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are many different reasons why I rated as I did.
The writing style reminds me of the styles often used in old pulp fantasies, such as Conan, and Kull. This isn't necesarily good or bad thing. But it does feel a bit on the basic side. However, the primary component to any writing is the reader's enjoyment, and I will say this was 'very' enjoyable.
Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: fantasy_raan On: February 13, 2002 02:35 CST
Comment/Review:
oh k ive read ranma gets power but im pretty this is most powerful one yet cant wait for more |
Reviewed By: Mic-ko On: February 11, 2002 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more,more,more,plese sune |
Reviewed By: noneed4nick On: February 11, 2002 07:20 CST
Comment/Review:
okay..... now that you've made ranma hellofalot powerful.... i just wondering how you're gonna keep the story going? nice story...but IMO you should've tone down ranma a bit and have him gained over the course of the story..not the first 2 chapter |
