| "The life of a hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 19:05 CST
Comment/Review:
WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!...........You haven't writen on this story in over a year.......WHY?........It's such a good story, How come all the fic's I like never get finished....*pout to self*........Please I know ists been over a year since you updated this fic but I realy want you to update it I love it sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.......I want to see the training and how Yoko and Lina's relationship progresses..../O.O\ I know ist probably alot to ask some one such as your self but this is a very good fic please update it........................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Hello lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmm....you had some errors in the story but overall it was pretty good! But if it was me, I would have kicked both their asses!!!!!!!! You know I don't play that!
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Title: I DID NOT WRITE THOSE PARTS BAKA!!!!!!!!1
Reviewed By: Sister my sister, tell me what we're fighting for, we've got to end this war On: January 03, 2006 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOW I KNOW I DIDN'T PUT SOME OF THOSE PARTS IN THERE BAKA. I can not believe you messed with my scene in chap five!! But overall it was pretty good, hurry and write the next chapter!
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Title: It was funny...
Reviewed By: Sesshana/ Sesshomaru's daughter On: December 17, 2005 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it because Kuronue is in it though. -smiles and giggles- He's eyes are just too cute. Anyway, please update soon. I don't care if you do have writer's block, just update.
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Reviewed By: HIEI_LOVERS On: November 30, 2005 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But I hate cliffy's oh well update soon.
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Title: (laughing) ^o^'
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The third chapter was sooo funny. I loved the story hope you update soon.
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