Reviewed By: MiraiSonGokou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2002 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Through the last parts of this story, I was shedding tears like nothing before...well perhaps a few other things, but this was still one hell of a tearjerker. I went through about ten tissues there at the end.
It is very ooc, but it's beautifully crafted in that style, and it's believeable. This could probably happen, it's not completely unconnectable with the real dbz. I feel Goku's pain with the teasing, seeing as I was always teased for being short, fat, chinese-looking, and skipping grades cuz the other year level was too easy. And being Saiyajin, bloodshed would probably work for Goku too, sadly.
Brilliant story...really great. One day I'll have read all of your stories, seeing as they're so fucking GOOD ^____^;; |
