| "Shippo's Fiery Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: foreverremember66 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahaha, its cute, but the Inuyasha characters were OOC I don't know if you wanted it that way, still, cute. Umm,... concerned, you spelled horrible and criticism wrong, so I wouldn't be talking.
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Title: Concerned
Reviewed By: InsaneTacotheauthor On: November 15, 2005 17:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Hahahahaha! That honestly made me laugh... First off, thank you for reviewing it! ^_^ Secondly, if you're going to complain about someone else's spelling, please check that yours is correct, first. ^_~ Oh geez.. that was great.. I especially loved the part where you went to correct the word horrible and misspelled CORRECTING! Woo... Anyway, I thought my spelling was fairly well. I'm not a genius with grammar, but I tried. By the way, in case you hadn't noticed... I didn't write this very seriously. ^_^ Just so you know! Well, thanks again! Have a nice day, madame... or sir...
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Reviewed By: Concerned On: November 14, 2005 16:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I spelt correcting wrong so I am just correcting that word 'correcting'
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Reviewed By: Concerned On: November 14, 2005 16:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I spelt horrible wrong this is just correcying it 'horrible'
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Reviewed By: Concerned On: November 14, 2005 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really horruble story. No offense I am going to give you some constructive critcism. You need to work on the following things: -Spelling -Grammar -Story Structure and many other things. I am not trying to be rude I just want to help so don't look at this in an offensive way.
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Reviewed By: Dragon of Darkness On: November 13, 2005 22:07 CST
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lol that was sooo funny
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Reviewed By: alwayshiei [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Insanetaco!!! I absolutley love your story!!! It was hilarious!!! It really brightened my day!!! I think your style of writing is great and I also think you should continue writing fan fictions on this site but if you switch sites tell me so I can follow your footsteps!!!! I think you're an awesome writer and that you should think about doing that as a career!If anyone insults or flames you just ignore them cuz both you and I know that you are a good writer
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