| "Moving On..." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Moving On...
Reviewed By: makaha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man this story was...totally awesome!!!!! i really like story's like this very creative. i am suggesting a sequel to show how she moved on and who with, you know? i lloved it and am hoping for a sequel.
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Title: Moving on...
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was wonderfull ( just like umm... hold on a sec... just like Sinashi said ) I just kinda..... it's so sad... I like most sad and this one is a very good one.... I'm confused... its a good fan fic just I don't like how it ended ^^ no offence k? SOOOOOOO....... Good fanfic! please continue writing! Don't let anyone push ya down, including me!
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: November 12, 2005 15:35 CST
Comment/Review:
a)i didn't like it I absolutely adored it! b)it was really good c)keep up the good work you're a great author don't let anyone tell ya different and d)if you don't continue i'm gonna be so pissed all the people i hate are gonna get a beating so my rage doesn't go out on other people *people i hate cowering* One person i hate:and we are her enimies and risking our lives because why? Another person i hate: i don't know now shut up and don't let her see you *people i hate get into a fight* (as usual and that's a lot of people fighting).
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