| "Bane of Existence/Love of A Lifetime" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lily_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know why you're so worried about your stories. They're so fresh, even with the fact that the pairings are, admittedly, rather commonplace. I think it's the new spin you put on the ideas of Kagome meeting the YYH gang. Needless to say you've caught my attention quite easily, and I'm known to be notoriously picky about the fics I read, especially x-overs. If you're still looking for someone to look over your fics I'd be more than happy to. I'm already a beta reader for someone on ff.net and I have a lot of free time on my hands, so I'd be able to devote plenty of attention to editing or just coming up with suggestions. *sighs* Sadly, I seem to be quite good at raising plot bunnies.XD I could always let you have some, of course. Feel free to contact me if you want.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 14:55 CST
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i think that this is a good story as it is, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 21:42 CDT
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this is a great story so far please continue it.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 21:52 CDT
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PERFECT! YOU ARE BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!! I love this fic you need to pdate immediatley!
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so good please please update
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Reviewed By: Hieis_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 01:58 CST
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A man, did you have to stop there it was getting very good
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Reviewed By: Hopelessly Hopefull [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 06:14 CST
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this story is simply amazing. there are so many qualities in here ranging from humor to tragedy. you have wonderfully captured their characters and i hope that you continue soon. much love always hope xxx
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still simply fantastic! Just read it again, and I am SO anxious for an update! I really enjoy your writing, and I am a true FAN. This story is the perfect example of how to pull off a threesome (or is it a foursome? ha!) that works. Love the humorous moments, too. I'm really looking forward to the coming confrontation with Inu, (Though i hope he lives to regret it!), and to the guys seeing her in battle to get a different type of respect for her abilitites. And of course, let us not forget the upcoming breaking of the seal on her powers and the mating! (Yay!) It's been a while since you've updated, and I hope you get a chance to do so soon. This is just so good!
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. Update again soon. Can't wait to read Inuyasha explaination of what he did to Kagome and how Sango and Mirkou take it.
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Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please update. this is such a great story and i love the *ahem* "pairing." I love finding stories with threes!!! anyways, update update update!!! i will give you a cookie...
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Reviewed By: lcar101 On: August 22, 2006 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more why did you stop more,
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 16:55 CDT
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Well, while I'm happy Yusuke and Kurama are going to share Kagome, I am pretty sure, that the decision, who'd be her first man, Yusuke, Youko or Minamino Shuichi is up to Kagome herself and not for them. Mating? Allright, it's a demon's thing and who'd be her first and who - second "official" mate they could work out between themselves, but to choose for Kagome her first sexual partner? It's plain wrong!
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Inubecca123 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I luv this story, its awesome that there will be a Kagome/Youko/Yusuke Pairing so please update! I begging you with all my heart!!!
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
P. S. Suppose, Kurama is the one she should marry in the human society - his family definitely would be happy! For Yusuke's mother, on the other hand, his matrimonial status wouldn't mean that much (if she even noticed her son married)
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 15:10 CDT
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I saw your story around since the day you've started to post it here and now I can only wonder, what the hell took me so long to read it! This is one of the rearest stories, where a threesome looks quite natural and workable, not forsed for a plot sake. It seems like you've decided to edit the fic? I just hope you'll update soon as well. Cheers!^_^
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Title: Love Your Story!
Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: July 30, 2006 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter! Update as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: solqua(unlogged) On: July 29, 2006 16:04 CDT
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yeah, an update, thank you so very much, i love this story
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Title: Yay Update
Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was thrilled to see that you updated too! I've been following this story since the beginning. I have a huge problem though with reviewing consistantly, especially with the few het fics I read. I'm a horrible person. I usually only read yaoi (duh)and there are so many crossovers with Kag that I get tired of them and usually don't read them anymore. But, yours had held my attention and interest since the beginning. The fact that Yusuke was in it is what lured me to read it in the first place. There are so few Yusuke/Kag fics. Any fic featuring Yusuke regardless of who he's paired with, male or female, demands my attention. I promise to be more diligent (sp)with reviewing in the future. I can't wait for the confrontation with Inu(bastard) again. He really needs a good ass kicking. And wait until Miroku and Sango find out what he did. How horrible must Kag's life be that she ends up with Youko/Kurama and Yusuke ^_^. I think it could get better if Kouga was with her too,lol. I know, I know that's not gonna happen, but I can imagine it for myself. Looking forward for more!
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Reviewed By: Laina On: July 29, 2006 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!! Thank you. I had pretty much thought you had given up on us and this luscious fic- thank you so much for proving me wrong.
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Reviewed By: yusuke_kagome_karama_4ever31(not loggin) On: July 28, 2006 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love the story so far can you please update soon
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 15:45 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: kagome4hiei (nsi) On: July 28, 2006 13:45 CDT
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Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 11:33 CDT
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Please excuse me whilst I join your other groupies in squealing. Ahem... OMGWTFBBQ, you UPDATED! Complete YAYness!! SQUEE!!! Ahem... Okay, I'm done now. I loved Miroku's line, "Are you sure she was taken against her will?", because there's a hidden double entendre in there whether he (or you) meant it to be there, as well as foreshadowing. I mean, we all know Kagome will be taken in the sexual sense, soon. So I pause to laugh at your genius wordplay. Ha! HA, I say! Then of course, there's the interaction between Kurama, Kagome, and Youko. Much cuteness and love abounds. Congrats on another great update, and I can't wait for more (on ANY fic! Update again, foo'!). Lurve always, Haywire
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: July 28, 2006 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALRIGHT!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!! I'M SOO HAPPY!!!! I really liked it and hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: TwiLiteVixen (@ff.net) On: July 12, 2006 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smirks* Do I forsee a threesom in the furure? Very good job. Methinks you have aquired another rabid fan...
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Update soon. Can't wait to see what the three of them do to Inuyasha if any thing. How they defeat Naraku and what happens with the rest of the Inu gang. Also if you bring Kieko back in to cause trouble.
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Title: Maleness-Goodness
Reviewed By: MidnightTimberWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok its been awhile since I last reviewed anyways these last two chapters were great. I loved it so when are they going to return to the village and have Kagome kick some butt? Anyways loved the entire story. Keep up the good work...
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Reviewed By: kagssibling On: May 16, 2006 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story that you have writing. please continue with it. i love thw fact that you have made the characters very developed
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 14:04 CDT
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Wow... I've really missed out on a lot. The last chapter I read on AFFnet was where Keiko confronted Kagome. *snicker* At any rate-- I reiterate this-- WOW. Nicely written. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful story!!!! I hope you update soon!
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