| "Bane of Existence/Love of A Lifetime" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tokugawa) On: April 24, 2006 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story its so cute ^.^ but Keiko needs to be hurt really badly, PELASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE... Pleaseeeeeeee
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Reviewed By: Tokugawa (A.k.a Jezebel.) On: April 24, 2006 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: kenshin lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 17:40 CDT
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Love this story. My favorite characters for Kagome to be with, besides Inuyasha, are Yuske and Karama so to have a story where they are both with her is great! Keep writing please and I look forward to the next update. Hope it is soon.
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR (not logged in) On: April 02, 2006 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome, original fic. Your style of writing and vocabulary is very clear and descriptive. Please update soon. I think one of the best things about this fic is inuyasha from a different point of view. : )
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Reviewed By: Kagome's Heart On: March 17, 2006 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is definetly good. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: March 17, 2006 07:06 CST
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Beautiful. Moving. Stunning. Funny. This work is amazing, and I can't wait to read more. Only one critique - fix the summary so it looks as good on the outside as it does on the inside. You've put 'piece' instead of 'peace'! Looking forward to more soon....
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 02:13 CST
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oh that was so awesome!! Yusuke/Kagome/Kurama|Youko I wonder what Shippou's reaction is going to be to their new looks and Kagome's to Youko.. Hey when are you going to have Kagome/Kurama|Youko moments?
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Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 09:34 CST
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Enjoying your work!
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Reviewed By: dark crystal On: March 06, 2006 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story and hope you will continue the story. I love the pairing that you picked! I'm so wondering what happens next. Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: mac65 On: February 26, 2006 21:46 CST
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Ilike this story so far... I really love the idea of a Yusuke/Kagome/kurama pairing...even the characterization of Sess is great! My only concern is why kagome is the way she is.. almost like a split personality. I mean, she is so tough and all, and stands her ground, ordering Inuyasha off her proprty; but when she is back in the past, she seems to behave like a helpless female???!!! That part just irritates me, because I can't see why in the story she is behaving this way. I know there needs to be some angst, but I would appreciate it if Kags could start to become stronger a bit sooner! Other than that, please keep up the good work and update soonest!
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Title: Whee~
Reviewed By: Tijiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really know how to leave someone in suspense don't you? I can't wait to find out who is the one that found her, I have guesses, but when it comes to your stories one can never be certain. I hope that you update soon because I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter! (When am I not?) Keep up the great work! ~Tijiya
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Title: Keeps getting better
Reviewed By: Tijiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time I read this it keeps getting better and better! Wow, that could have gone better. But I half expected Inuyasha to react like that. I quite agree with Sesshomaru-sama! Please hurry up with the next chapter, I can't wait to read it! Keep up the fantastic job! ~Tijiya
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 16:17 CST
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*pulls out a big sharp pointy thing* now.... *looks at pointy then to writer* update and you and pointy shall never be aquainted..... but if it's any testimony i LOOOOOOOVVVVEEEEE it!
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Reviewed By: WhiteWolf931 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 06:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really good but you need to finish it please
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh awsome!!!! This has been a great story so far. I like the twist of self doubt that Kagome struggles with, it's great because I can so see it as a reality for her. I look forward to the next chapter. I am at the edge of my seat to see how things work when Kagome and the boys go to the past. I can't wait for the bonds between Kuruma, Kagome and Yusuke come together more as a unit and not just Yusuke and Kagome. I'm chomping at the bit here. Great work and keep it up. Looking forward to more. Oh and by the way I don't always leave a review when I read but know that you are on my story favorites list and that I do read even if I don't always review.
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