| "Bane of Existence/Love of A Lifetime" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha! that third chapter was so funny! anyways, update soon! sincerely, your faithful reviewer, silver_wolf5
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Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 22:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it can't wait to read more!!! so is it a three way between Yusuke/Kag/Yoko/Kurama?
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 22:38 CST
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I love your style of writing! The dream-like quality fits so well with the plot so far. Normally, i'm firmly against triangles, as the vast majority of the time, it involves serious warping of character personalities. However, i also really don't want anyone to be left out of the love party, either. So, i'm going to withold judgment until, first of all, i find out exactly what pairing you decide on, and then if you do choose to write a triangle, we'll see how you handle two highly possessive males having to share a girl they both have strong feelings for. Anyway, i'm really loving you story so far, and hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That 2nd chappie was so great! i luved it so much! Is it going to be a Kurama/Kagome/Yusuke pairing cuz i think Kurama deserves a mate as well. well, whatever you decide i bet i'll luv it! =]
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great beginning for a probably great story^_~ Plz update this and ur other stories soon! luv ur fics!!!!!!=]
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 22:18 CST
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Very, very nice start. Not much to say about this chapter, but we'll see how the next one goes. Can't wait to see how you play this out!
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Title: kawaiikuroykitsune
Reviewed By: kuroykitsunemiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It's cute and sweet! You wrote this perfectly and I couldn't find a single mistake whenever I looked. The entire chapter was great! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!! i like the story so far!!! ^_^
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