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Reviewed By: taixishi On: May 26, 2008 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled across your writings and I must say that you've produced a number of good stories. There are so many mediocre fanfics out there; but it's a breath of fresh air to come across your writing, which are definitely a few [or many] steps above the average fanfic. This story, like your others that I've seen, not only has a clever basic plot but also employs a healthy (but not excessive) amount of character introspection and development. Most importantly (in my view) is your style of writing, which doesn't bog down in overly verbose descriptions and keeps spelling/grammar errors to a minimum, and utilizes a very natural flow (not overly flippant nor needing to get over itself -- e.g. the type of writing where the author attempts to appear erudite by using big words and complex sentence structures out of synch with the tone of the story). Basically, I enjoy your stories and your writing style in general. As for this particular story, I see it's been a long while since you finished, and you've moved on to other stories, but it would be great to see a sequel to Quadrangle if you get the urge (perhaps this review can help spur you along?) :) You've left a lot of aspects unresolved, e.g., the whole question of whether/how Inuyasha will move on with his life sans Kagome, and also the question of how the magic of the well will be restored. [I understand you've done so intentionally, and in anticipation of perhaps writing a sequel]. As for the magic of the well, I've always thought that it makes perfect sense that Kagome herself would somehow be involved with establishing the well/shrine and the Higurashi tenure there. Perhaps you've already planned on such a scenario; regardless I'd love to see what you do in a sequel. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 22:21 CDT
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Oh wow! I had completely forgotten about this fic. You finished it, too! I remembered everything up to the point of Kagome swallowing the jewel. I have to say, Inuyasha is as dense as Kouga, if not more so. Poor Sesshoumaru never knew what hit him. LOL It was good to see Kagome get something out of the whole adventure, and sad that she had the miscarriages. Considering how you wrote Kikyou, she got what she deserved. I wonder if the wish had anything to do with that? It was neat to find out that there was a basis for Kagome's nightmares. Hm. The end was very humorous. Sesshoumaru truly has lost control. I bet he was as bad, if not worse than, his father. That last scene was so funny! Well, I'm off to see if I've missed additions to any other stories that you've written. Some of my notifications don't get emailed to me anymore. Sorries. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 02:12 CDT
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this was a good story. I cant wait to read the sequel, please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 00:56 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Your story was nominated in the category Best Romance (non Inu/Kag) Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 22:02 CDT
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Oh dear. Though I dislike Kagome and Sesshomaru stories with a crazii passion this story is an exception. SO very special, it pulled the heartstrings and worked my emotions. Jeeze, Im still unsure if Im support the determined couple or not. But I still loved this story and one of a kind plot. Also I cant help but feel sorry for Inuyasha. I know how it is to be used by a 'first love'. UH. So after my annoying confusing, this story is a favorite. Incredible job. =)
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 16:28 CST
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This was wonderful to re-read. I miss your stories. Hope you are doing well. I wish health upon you!
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Title: Sequal PLEASE
Reviewed By: Aarabriall On: September 20, 2006 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story it literally one of my favs! I simply cant get it out of my head half the time and the other half I'm reading it or talking with someone else about it! You left us all with a cliffy! Please write a sequal! I know that it will be amazing and welcomed! Its simply that good!
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Reviewed By: EmpyrealFantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 21:18 CDT
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I think this was an adorable story, hun, are you planning to write a sequel?
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Reviewed By: White Luna(nsi) On: May 02, 2006 07:24 CDT
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That was absolutely awesome. A beautiful fic with some funny, and somewhat demented humor. The most brilliant line in the entire story was when Kagome hugged herself and said, "Screw you guys. I'm going home." I thought that was fabulous! It took her long enough to say it! I wish she actually would, and it was just so funny to think about! You're an awesome writer, I love your stories. Keep it up, this story was so cool.
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Title: EEE!
Reviewed By: anonymouse On: March 13, 2006 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Makes me smile and get all misty eyed. You are a goddess of the pen my friend!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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so hot!!
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Title: Nice!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: February 20, 2006 14:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think kagome and sesshomaru should tell that hanna to mind her own buissness! besides oral sex is safe:-)
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Title: Quadrangle
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to skip over here and read the lemon version. You know what a hentai I am. Anyway, I LOVED it! Loved the whole thing. The story was excellant. You have so much talent. I love the humor and the erotic feel, the angst and the action. Everything went beautifully. I would enjoy a sequel, just to see where the situation went with Inuyasha. I'm sure it would be a great read, just as this one has been. I will be on the lookout for your new fics too. Thank you! Until next time~ Rinseternalsoul
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Reviewed By: mspotts(not logged in) On: February 19, 2006 12:36 CST
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this is an amazing fic! i luv sess/kag!!
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