| "With arms wide open" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 20:43 CDT
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u just hadd 2 end the chapter there didnt u?? but this was a good chapter & i hope u update it soon.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: charity - nicole On: February 18, 2007 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!!!!! you have to update.. see i love this sstory sooo much its going on my favs list!!!! please please please PLEASE!!!!!! update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 23:48 CST
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yay!! another update. this chapter was really good. cant say i was expecting orochimaru at the end tho. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 23:24 CST
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I really like the plot and story so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 17:49 CST
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yay!! u finally updated!! lol. anyways, good chapter. i hope u can update a lot sooner than wat this chapter was. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: August 30, 2006 15:01 CDT
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Sasuke you bastard. T_T NARUTO NEEDS A HUG!! *glomps him*
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Title: Judt reread the first three chapters
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: August 19, 2006 19:21 CDT
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You did clear a few things up that were bugging me. The whole thing with the magically disappearing door really threw me, I couldn't figure out how/why the room changed. Now I see that it was an outburst from Naruto and he broke things. And the encounter with Sasuke where he stabs Naruto was made much more clear as well. All in all it was so worth it to revise it, and I enjoy this story alot more now that it isn't as vague. Thanks ^_~
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Title: *blinks*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: August 19, 2006 19:15 CDT
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It's making more sense. I think. *headwall* That bare taste of Sasuke just left me more frustrated. So. Confusing. But in a better way now. It's confusing in a less random way now. So... yeah. Rock on. I shall wait some more for things to become clear.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 00:28 CDT
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i reread everything. it made the story even better. but i really wanna c what happens next. so plz update it soon.
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: August 16, 2006 12:12 CDT
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Hey i reread all of the chapters and i stille say that i really love this story and i cant wait to see what happends next so please update it really soon ok thanks tootles.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 17:41 CDT
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this fic is really kool. plz update it soon.
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: July 31, 2006 11:35 CDT
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Hey great chapters and yes i am still into your story so please update more chapters really soon ok thanks tootles.
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Title: ... O_O
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar(nli) On: July 30, 2006 22:00 CDT
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Is this NaruSasu on I sense on the wind? Or is my yaoi fangirl mind tricking me? The last two chapters don't feel like they match to me, Naruto's condition seems different.. hmm... Once again, I shall wait and watch.
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Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: July 29, 2006 20:55 CDT
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I'm still feeling very WTF??-ish. I.. O_O suppose I'll just chill and wait for everything to be explained...
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Reviewed By: Sutashiii On: December 13, 2005 23:49 CST
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Wow Sasuke attacked him!! and wheres Kyyubi! Great job by the way I cant wait for more! Im suprised you haven't gotten more reviews... Again great job!
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