| "Postcard From "America"" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: THAT WAS COOL
Reviewed By: Mikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is a coolo story when will u start the next chapt? ur so cool Spelling & Grammar: Originality/Creativity: Enjoyment Factor r sry i am a new person pn here by the way i don't know what
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Reviewed By: Starry Dreamer On: November 14, 2005 03:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Koind of unrealistic and a bit rushed. No one would really give such a specific adress and it made it seems like you just wanted to get rid of Sango. It also kinda seems like things just happen out of nowhere. It's kinda like the Blair Witch Project. It sounds good so you watch it...something happens....something happens....and then it's over and you're all like "what the hell?". Maybe you could work on that a bit. Other than that, I really like this! Update soon! It sounds like it could make a cute story.
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Reviewed By: Dragon of Light On: November 14, 2005 01:07 CST
Comment/Review:
great story update soon please
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Reviewed By: INUCANDY On: November 13, 2005 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON THAT WAS LIKE SO GOOD .UPDATE
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Reviewed By: inuinu On: November 13, 2005 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
perfect start 2 it.update soon
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