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Title: well done
Reviewed By: Raikor and Taikor inc (loggedout) On: December 14, 2005 15:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have done an excelent job with this story, at first i didin't plan on reading it that much because at first it seemed like just another inu bashing story, but then after what yukio did you mnaged to get me puissed off with him and i even had a dream where i beat the shit out of him. good job.
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Title: Holy shit!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 13, 2005 23:05 EST
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Damn. You did that shit justice. That was the beating he deserved. I loved it. The carving? A stroke of genius. I LOVED this chap. One of the best stories i've read in a LONG time!
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Title: w_j (not logged in)
Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 23:01 EST
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I hesitate to think what will happen now. Youkio will tell the police about the well and it could go one of two ways: Youkio is labeled 'crazy' or Youkio is believed and Kagome's family has a huge problem on their hands. It doesn't look good. And bless Miroku for his offer to cover for Inuyasha. I liked that.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 21:52 EST
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I find it very interesting that there is no word for "rapist" in Japanese. I'm a Victim Advocate for sexual assault victims in the Navy, and I knew about other countries and how they viewed rape cases, but I didn't know that piece of information. I will have to incorporate that into our training. I definitely applaud you on how well you've written and developed this story and you've stuck to the facts concerning rape, too. I can't wait to see how this all turns out. If you need any info or want to know about anything else let me know. But it seems like you've got an awesome grasp on it. Kudos for your facts and kudos for a great story!
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 22:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn girl can u write! i bet im not half as pissed/tense as they are, but...just...GRRRR uptade soon pllllleeeaaassseeee arigato
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Title: Short, but still good!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 21:54 EST
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I love Kag's mom. She didn't try any goody-goody shit. Yukio needs to get it & soon & Inu will be the bearer!
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Title: Authors notes are depressing
Reviewed By: cougiecat1 On: December 07, 2005 00:47 EST
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Yup ok. The hidden Yukio creapiness comes out. ick. I thought he was quarter daemon or something, but no- he's just 100% creap. Your authors notes add a lot of depth to the story in that they take it from a slightly exagerated plot twist to a deeper look at society and the issues that will be surrounding the situation. The fact that you've taken the time to compare japanese vs american views on rape, law enforcement, and victim's rights adds a great deal to this story, especially since I have the feeling you will be looking more closely into these issues in later chapters. I know it will get worse (for Kags) before it gets better, but I'm still looking forward to the story anyway!
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Title: Aaaah oh happy day!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 06, 2005 19:20 EST
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You updated!! I live for these updates :-D So Kags gave InuYasha permission to whip his ass. Praise God! lol I hoped he tears him into pieces. But there's also pregnancy and mental health. I hope they can get past this & i REALLY hope Yukio's ass kicking will be in FULL detail! ^_^
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Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 13:43 EST
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I can't wait until the part where Inuyasha confronts Yukio! I'm glad Kagome didn't take a bath after all, or Inuyasha may have been angry at her for longer than he was. I'm enjoying this story despite the rape bit (not fond of rape - big surprise). About the purity thing, isn't it sexist if Kagome were to lose her powers while Miroku can have all the sex he wants and still be able to zap demons? Just a thought.
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: December 06, 2005 13:12 EST
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I admire your handling of this subject. The dark chapters are very well done (all of them are, but those stand out). I look forward to reading the rest of your story. wj (aka SoutasSister)
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Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 12:54 EST
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Thank you! It is amazing to me that the law is so willing to discount and blame the woman for being raped. It can also be the same thing with child abuse. I was told just not to go back to my cousin's room, (who I spent every day of every summer vacation with) and to forget about it. I'd like to see them forget about it!
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Title: colly
Reviewed By: Becksterzz On: December 05, 2005 20:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im loving the story plz dont leave me hanging and update soon
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Reviewed By: Kajunmom76 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 14:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
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Title: Had to leave one here too!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 13:51 EST
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I love Love LOVE this fic, but ofcourse you know that already :wink: I didn't know it was here, now i can happily wait for notifications. YAY! Awesome job.
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Title: T____T
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 18:47 EST
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OMG. *___* Well, it happens! If Kagome tells Inuyasha I think he'll rip Yukio's head off and cram it up his ass! It's so true, often the first thing a woman does is take a bath (thereby erasing all evidence). Not that it would have made much difference anyway. >.> So very sad. And what a way to obliterate Kagome's purity.
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