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Title: delicate...delicate!
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 01:16 EST
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Oooh precarious ground! I hope things turn out for Inu and Kag! It seems a bit rushed right now... Kagome seems very fickle liking Yukio so much one minute and then not so much the next. And she really got Inuyasha to spill his guts to her quickly! Although it wasn't without a good does of angst, it was still fast considering how very guarded he is. I guess he must have felt very, very strongly about everything (his actions do speak loudly here) so that would have made it easier for him to come clean. And what was that about sex?!?! Speaking of rushed! @___@ Gee whiz, the sooner she gets away from that dude the better! And if he tries anything funny, Inu will kick his ass but good! Hmph! >:(
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Reviewed By: bluegirl On: November 28, 2005 19:20 EST
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i like this story. keep it up, and im very interested to see how it all ends
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Reviewed By: Darks_lil_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 14:38 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arg this is the second time that this has happened to me!!! The story gets really good and your at the edge of the seat but then all of a sudden the story cuts off and I'm stuck just waiting and praying that you'll update soon!! Please don't make me go throught that again! And by the way this is really a great plot and good twists and turns althought I was alittle upset that kagome went all the way with Yukio... But hey your the author! ^.^ but anyway update soon K?
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Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 07:45 EST
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This has fast become one of my top 3 fav WIPs... And I have to disagree with the people over on AFF that are saying Kagome is OOC. I don't think she's that at all. She just finally reached the point where she realized that she might need to get over Inuyasha (because he is clearly in love with Kikyou and not her - in her mind) and is attempting to move on. Or at the very least is drawn to the affection that another is giving her because she isn't getting it from the man she loves. As humans, we all need love and affection and will look for it in alternative places when we don't get it by conventional means. It's not selfish or even conscious most of the time - it's self preservation in it's most raw. Now I do think I have an idea where you are going with the fic from here, but I'll decline to comment in case there are those reading this that haven't figured it out. All I will say is that if it IS going where I think it is, Inuyasha had BETTER believe her when she tells him how it was. He may not be willing to listen to her at first, but one thing about him is that he knows Kagome doesn't lie to him and he WOULD believe her after they talked. And they WOULD talk because if he tried to avoid it, Kagome would go to the others for help... Okay, I'm done for now. Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 22:37 EST
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i love your story it's cool!
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Reviewed By: Angelica Pierce (NSI) On: November 24, 2005 12:21 EST
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I really like the tension you've set up here. You made Inuyasha do something that caused Kagome to realize/think that he didn't understand her or care about her life or future. Then you introduce a new character that is not from some other convenient show and don't have Kagome immediately ZOMG!INLOVE with him. I really hope you continue this and do so quickly. I can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: November 24, 2005 11:59 EST
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Poor Inuyasha. He's going to get a clue the hard way, huh? Thanks for posting two chapters at once. I'm really enjoying your story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Title: Awwww!!!
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 09:02 EST
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Poor Inuyasha! I feel so sorry for him, but it serves him right. If you treat a girl like he's treated Kagome he's going to have to expect that she'll find someone else who will treat her right. It's great so far! I wonder if Yukio will do anythign with his newfound knowledge of the well.
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Reviewed By: miko_kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 19:09 EST
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hi there please continue the story
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Reviewed By: cougiecat1 On: November 21, 2005 01:18 EST
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very interesting story. Yukio seems to have a hidden agenda. Of course he could honestly want to date the cronically ill girl that seems surprisingly healthy... Anyway very good story. lots of room for angst and plot twists. looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 22:29 EST
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Keep the chapters coming. And I didn't mean to upset you by asking for longer chapters. My chapters are mostly over 10,000 words, so don't pay attention to me if I gripe. Anyway, I like your story so far. Thanks for sharing it with us. wj (aka SoutasSister)
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Title: it's great so far
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 21:38 EST
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A very interesting start! Gotta wonder how Inuyasha will react to the new face, but it serves him right for being such a jerk! Yukio is definitely an intriguing character - I'm looking forward to learning more about him.
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Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 12:32 EST
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Hmmm it's getting more and more interesting. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: SoutasSister [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 10:46 EST
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It's interesting so far. I hope you update soon with longer chapters. And I think you would get a lot more reviews if you change your settings to allow people not signed in to leave a review.
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