| "Hells Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: kagomerocks241 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to update soon
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Reviewed By: kagomerocks241 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update and get tora to return in kagome's school
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Reviewed By: kagomerocks241 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so please updatre again soon
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Title: Whoops
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: July 08, 2006 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SORRY. I said that my B- day was june 12th,it's JULY 12th. But I( still really want u 2 write a new chapter! PLEASE! PLEASE!
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Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: July 08, 2006 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!! and...Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism... they might be moving a little too quickly, but somehow that works. Can't wait till next update! and...wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed. AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment) INUYASHA AND SESSHY ARE SO DAMN SEXY IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!! I want them for my birthday! (or at least another chapter) My b- day is june 12th :-D just thought i'd tell you that(*hint hint**wink wink*. And wow.. I wish I was living this story or something.. THEY'RE SO HOT! sorry...I'm better now.. ok I'm gonna go before I start drooling all over my keyboard. Please add more chapters! Lemony even! :-D ok, bye, also I usually don't ask writers to hurry up and updte because I beleive it is very rude. But this one time I will be rude. PLEASE update faseer than a month. I don't think I can what that long. Another great chapter by the way.^_^
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Reviewed By: animegurl_06 On: May 12, 2006 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ooookkkk On: April 23, 2006 08:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
LEMON! ewww that makes me sound bad... o nd kill naraku PLZ!!! :) thnx
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Reviewed By: kagomerocks241 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please update soon
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Reviewed By: Beccakitten2003 On: April 02, 2006 12:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
please, please, please update! I love this story!
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 19:24 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a cute story I hope you update soon
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Title: smokin'
Reviewed By: awsome2anime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that really was amokin' grl its alicia l8a
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Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 18:20 CST
Comment/Review:
please update the story its the best ive ever read and i read over 100 stories. so please update.
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Title: Hells angel
Reviewed By: Resa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic was great! it did have its gross factors but that made because me and Alicia almost fell over laughing because she said the wrong words!!! Isn't that hilarious!! Overall it was spakin'. well talk to ya later and don't kill Alicia its not her fault she mispronounces words too often:)
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover4life [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
i like its its funny and cute at the same time!
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Reviewed By: elvin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 19:59 CST
Comment/Review:
hmm interesting story so far deffinitley different (not in a bad way ;) ) cant wait to see where u take this story
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