"MST-- "Humanity"~ By Digifan3:16" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Toa Nuva On: April 27, 2003 05:37 CDT Comment/Review: Me:I've grown a loooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnggggggg whtie beard waiting for you to continue, YET, you present the kind readers with a BIG,FAT,STINKING HUNK OF NOTHING!!!!!Just write more before I blow my top! |
Reviewed By: Digifan316 On: February 04, 2002 12:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: TOM: WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO?! TAKE OUR JOBS!
CROW: WE WON'T HAVE IT!
BOTS (Chanting): GET THEM OUT! GIVE US JOBS! GET THEM OUT! GIVE US JOBS!
316: Guys, the more fics they have to read, the less fics we'll have to read.
(BOTS think)
BOTS (Chanting): KEEP THEM THERE! DON'T GIVE US JOBS! KEEP THEM THERE! DON'T GIVE US JOBS!
316: Great job MiSTing my fic. BTW, I'm proud of all my works. I can't wait till the next part. |
Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: February 06, 2002 18:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Problems? The only thing less than perfect was that you had one or two grammar problems, but that's really nit-picking. Especially once you consider how REALLY FUNNY it is! *claps* Very good!
~Nisou |