| "Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Valeria*2* On: November 19, 2003 08:37 CST
Comment/Review:
hi! i'm an italian girl and....... sorry but"L'attesa giusta e vede. La avrò e faccio la sua miniera…" it'isnt correct you have write Translation; " Just wait, and see. I will have her, and make her mine." the translation correct in italian is: "aspettare e vedere, avrò lei, e la farò mia" ^__^ "miniera" in english is mine but mine, the adjective possessive, in italian is Mio/a....^_^ mine = mio yours= tuo.... ^____________^ bye^__-
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Reviewed By: M@G$ On: June 18, 2002 22:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohmg!! Write more!! just as i was getting into it you stopped!!! PLEEZE !!!????? buhbye. |
Reviewed By: Xaira On: March 22, 2002 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this but... There's something that nearly drew my away from it in the end... I can't quite figure it out though... Hey here's a question: I was just wondering if you were British? I noticed the way you used the words "cheeky" and "fancy"....Just curious!! Good fic though... |
Reviewed By: Xaira On: March 22, 2002 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
and "fancy"....Just curious!! Good fic though... |
Reviewed By: Setsuna'sSara On: February 08, 2002 10:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm biased toward anything Escaflowne, but this is a great read so far! PLEASE continue the story! I am dying to find out what happens next! Your timeline is sort of confusing, but I still like it. |
Reviewed By: hannah On: April 09, 2002 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fanfic. i would really like to thank you for fixing chapter 4. please continue to write this story. the plot is very compelling. |
