| "Learn To Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 05:56 CST
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I really enjoyed these last three chapters. Interesting take on all of this. I am curious to see where you are going to go with this. A lot was divulged in these last three chapters, specially the second one.
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Title: nc
Reviewed By: Sand_Demon On: December 30, 2005 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAD BETTER WRITE THE NEXT FUCKING CHAPTER OR I SWEAR TO THE LORD OF THE DAMNED I WILL GO OVER THERE AND KICK YOUR FUCKING ASS TO THE NEXT DIMENSION!!!! >.< this is a good story overall, anyway. on to the next story...XD Remember: ...if you don't write the next chapter...well...to put it bluntly...FUCK YOU!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 07:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. Sad, but good. Update soon, thanx.
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story, Story! hehe. Poor Inu..he's got so much crap in his life and he needs some happiness. Hopefully, he'll let Kags in. This story is going on my favorites list and I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: leowit On: December 14, 2005 06:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE UR STORY ITS THE BEST
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 03:51 CST
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Wows another dark chapter. I am really enjoying the way you are writing this story. I felt so bad for him. Loved the flashback scene with Sesshoumaru.Hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 05:14 CST
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Haha--Got to love the 'The customers always right'. Ack-- I hate having to do that!-- Ohhs that bj in the car was hot.---Damn he is going through so much hell with his Dad.
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Reviewed By: Soma-san [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really awesome. It's dark and i love the attention you put in to details. Tough loner Inuyasha is awesome. Keep the updates coming please!
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Reviewed By: Brokenangel_Alex On: November 26, 2005 16:33 CST
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ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Hah! I love it !!GO GO GO GO!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 03:04 CST
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Another good chapter. I loved how he explained about the book. Sooooooooo much angst! Why am I the only reviewer on this, lately? Keep writing, and I will keep reviewing!
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Title: Chapter-4
Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 02:47 CST
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Chapter 4- I love how you're not rushing into this. The hug was a sweet and deserving touch. I love how he confessed to her about what was really happening!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 02:31 CST
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Chapter 3-Woooweees you update quickly! That's not a complaint! I feel really bad for Inuyasha, and the shit he is going through at home. Really good job on explaining the school and the clicks that most have. So much angst. Love it!
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Reviewed By: Alex_BrokenAngel On: November 20, 2005 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it coming! I like this tough jackAss inuyasha
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 04:13 CST
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Thank you times 20! I was just telling someone, I really needed something dark and angsty to read. As happy furry bunnies were dancing merrily around me. *swats them* ~~ Anyways, I really like what I have read so far. I love how you are doing this!! Hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: brokenhate On: November 16, 2005 16:52 CST
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wow. that was an amazing first chapter. quite angsty, but i love it still. i love the plot, it's capturing a sense of reality that people like to avoid. also, this was a nicely written chapter.
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