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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Darksaint On: May 27, 2008 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I really enjoyed the chapter and I am glad you came back in the writing fanfic world. However, I am glad Inuyasha has made up his mind on Kagome though, I do hope it is on the right reason...which by the way I highly doubt..Lol oh and I think I really adore that Jen charcter. Her attitude is funny but Inuyasha trying to confront a African girl..please in my opinion he wouldn't have stand a chance..lol ^^ anyways lookin forward to your next chapter Happy writing Darksaint...:3
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 14:38 CST
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I was so excited to see that you had updated. It's a short but good chapter. Like the little backround on the family. Please don't take as long to update the next chapter, because I really love this story.
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I have to tell you. It has taken me two days to get my thoughts together to write this review. I had to ponder over all the things to say. Had to let this story kind of sink in a little. I read three books a while back, one of them called A Child Called It. It was one of the worst cases of child abuse in US History, and the kid grew up to be a wonderful man. He accually wrote his own biography. Your story touched me pretty deep, and maybe that is because I'm a mom or maybe it was because I was abused as a little girl. The KFC scenes I have to tell you brings back some memories of a few years back**teenage yrs..lol**I worked for "another food chain" and I totally related and laughed. There were a few times I accually teared up a little too while reading this story. As far as feed back, I have no complaints. Your story is well written, very detailed. If I were to have any questions, I guess they would be...Is Sess coming back? Is this really ever going to be a romance between Kagome and Inu?? For some reason, he doesnt act very interested. However, I guess it is understandable. I mean, he likes girls**apparently**But she really hasnt so much as crossed his mind except in annoyance. Now the wonderful thing about this story is that I have no idea what the hell is going to happen next. My mind just starts going bonkers with whats gonna happen. I hope something happens at the club....like will Kags do something to make him crazy with jealousy?? Will she get hit on? Will she get stoned or drunk out of her mind? LOL. *sighs** I guess I will just have to wait and see. Thanks for writing this story. I am really enjoying it.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 13:21 CDT
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Great chapter! Glad that the party is next chapter. What does a beta do? Maybe I could do it.
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Title: happy your back
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just so damn happy that your back. and have updated another chapter I was worried that we would have never know what was going to happen. And don't worrie about that scene in chapter 1 was it? we can figure out what happen. although short it's better than nothing at all. hate is easier than anything else but it'll eat you up inside. and inu really has to kick kogas ass. and Sango what does she know? she knows nothing about our Inuyasha. step off bitch. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 13:12 CDT
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Good chapter, short, but good. Please update real soon!
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Title: PLEASE!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you please update gotta to know what's going to happen. Looking forward to the clud scene and why the hell is the water turning pink? Update or else I'll bring a mob of fans and tie you to a chair in front of a computer so that you can write at least 5 chapters. And I still want to know where the hell is Sesshomaru? did there father kill him when he tried to leave? see thing i need to know. (whining now) Please update soon.
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update need to know what's going to happen. I have to know that the pink stuff is unless you said it and I'm just to slow to understand it. still please update. ladytokyo
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. What DID that guy give Inuyasha?? LOL Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 11:26 CST
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Great chapter! I'm really looking forward to the club scene. I wanna know if Kagome is going to show up w/Sango and Miroku or not? Please update ASAP!
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Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Kiki33 On: December 31, 2006 21:02 CST
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*dramatic* The tension! The drama! The agony!!!... Ok dramatic moment over. Love, love, love ur story. Hope u update soon. And stop dragging it out. I want them to go to the club already.... *puppy eyes* pweeeeeeeaaaaase? LOL, don't forget ur loyal fans are waiting, Kiki33
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Title: Damn
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn what an up date!. This chapter was just to good. Between Inuyasha and Sango than Inuyasha and the doctor plus Kikyou Than after all that coming home to find his mother beaten badly. Hummm plz update soon I just have to know what Inuyasha going to do to save her if she can be saved. What happen for is father to finally raise his hand to her. And I wanted to know are you going to put Sesshomaru back into the picture? Some of want to know what happen to him and why didn't he come back for is otouto? Please update .
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 09:47 CST
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I don't know how you can be such a sadist writing this, but it is good. Izayoi being a totally negligent bitch, and a father who's insane, makes sense to make Inuyasha the way he is with both his parents still alive. Anyway, I like this story, despite the abuse, a-hole Yash, naive as hell Kagome (always was, always will), and abandoning Sesshomaru. Of course, 2 years into the story, and you haven't even really started, you say, where are you going form here? Scarface-ville, or something near realistic? It is a valid question, afterall. Anyway, like I said, the torture, emotional, physical, and the amnesia, realistic, and well written. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. The ending almost made me cry!! Update soon please cause I can't wait for more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 14:02 CST
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Oh! Such a good chapter! Inuyasha is so very vell dne even if a bit OOC, but he's still very, VERY well thought through) Keep it on, and update soon!
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