| "Never Ending Love" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: High and Mighty Review
Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was cracking up. My favorite part was the 'Squishy Boob Lady' part. Im still laughing.
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awsome chappie. This story rocks. And is still hilarious.
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very finny begining. Very light mood. I love it.
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Reviewed By: me chibirin8 On: December 03, 2005 00:46 CST
Comment/Review:
i no that there are alot of spelling errors and im having my friend fix that English is my worst class im more of a math person. and ill make sure to tell my friend ashely that you liked the pic she did i know she will be happy to her it. also he will be doing that in the next chapter that I put up i have half of it done now but it still may be a few days till i have it up.
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh didn't log in On: December 02, 2005 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
A rather mediocre fic, with spelling bordering on disasterous. I don't mean to be rude or mean, but the grammar is more fitted to a fifth grader, not someone who claims to be eighteen. There were more grammatical errors than I care to spend time counting in the first chapter alone. I'm sure, however, that if you found a beta editor your fic would improve tenfold. By the way, I really like that picture of Miroku in Kagome's uniform. That was very entertaining.
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 16:49 CST
Comment/Review:
It's ok so far. I hope you add more detail to the other chapters.
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Reviewed By: Ashely On: November 15, 2005 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I really like it so far, I can't wait to read the rest of it. I'm excited about the IBBC.
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