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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 11:55 CST
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aww! cute! and yey for milk! i like skim! whole milk is too thick... like eggnog... *shudder*
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 12:45 CST
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awesome chap dude. CARTON DRINKERS ROCK!!!!!!! please update soon.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update, I loved this chapter. I like the taste of whole milk, and soy milk, but my mom always usually buys the reduced fat or 2% milk. And she gets the gallons usually so it' a bit heavier to drink from it straight up. But I manage, lol... I can't wait for the next chapter!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY you updated!!! Great chappie, I loved it, and if this was a belated christmas present, then thank you, I liked it very much, lol. Great update, and Happy Holidays, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 19:45 CST
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great chapter! lemons are love! lol... and i really want more of the sess/rin!! will you have a lemon for them?? what happened to her family??
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Title: chp 9
Reviewed By: InuBaby369246 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's an EVIL cliffie! I do love this, so I'll forgive you. Please update soon becuase I'm impatient to find out what happens
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 00:41 CST
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Aww, when I got the email that you updated, I was excited. But I understand, cus I have school too, so yes I understand the evilness of homework from the so called teachers, lol. Anyway, one update a week is good enough for me. And of course I'll still be interested, how could I not, it's a great story... ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: InuBaby369246 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! I also think that it's hilarious at times. I can't wait for you to update. So, please update soon.
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Title: Hey it's me...
Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's me Trinity, Trini for short. Wow... That was... an awesome chapter! LoL. I'm smiling to myself right now. You actually took what I said in my last review and did this chapter with major Inu and Kaggie fluff. I'm glad, it was such a cute story, and a great song. I used to be obsessed with 'A Walk to Remember', the movie, book, and that song. It's one of my old time favorites, I loved the performance of that song from the movie too. It was just so beautiful... Okay I'm done gushing, don't mind me. Super great update, thanks for the fluff dedication, it was awesome, and I LOVED this chapter. Great work, I can't wait for the next chappie. By the way, why was Kagome crying at the end of the chapter, or tearing I should say. I mean I understand she's hesitant because she just met him, by why the tear? Other then that, once again super super great update. P.S. If you watched the movie 'A Walk to Remember' Shane West was hot wasn't he? LoL, j/j. :P I can't wait for the next update, great job, keep it up!!! ;) -Trini
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Title: niiiiice
Reviewed By: Spygirl3034 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is great, that last ch was *sniffle*...beautiful...will fluffy *giggle*(u gotta luv that name) and rin...get it on?....anyways as i was saying...great story, keep ^ the very
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 21:59 CST
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that was such a sweet chap!! I lurved it! ^_^ can't wait for more!
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Title: my bad...
Reviewed By: Spygirl3034 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oops my bad, i forgot to give u sum ratings *nervos laugh*
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Reviewed By: Spygirl3034 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 17:00 CST
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kick ass story, i liked ur last ch. i would of liked more inu and kag time but thats just me, ur storyis rockin' me likei. keep up the very good work, update soon plz
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 13:26 CST
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lmao. i didn't think this chapter sucked at all. in fact, i was giggling through the entire ren/sess deal. :P that was so cute!! lmao. and i lurve inuyasha. *sighs* hehe. nice job. ^_^ can't wait to see what else you have cooked up!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 04:22 CST
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Well... This chapter wasn't crappy persay... Look on the bright side, at leasr you introduced Rin and her spunk right? That's a good thing. And it really wasn't bad, it just mainly focused on Inu and Sess... Next chappie, more Kaggie and Inu k? More fluff. And about the whole trilogy love thing, maybe you could make Inu and Kag a little longer than the rest cus their the main characters, and the other ones can have a small amount of chapters like you said. Just a suggesttion... Other than that, decent/good update. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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