| "Demon Day Care" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 17:55 CST
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NICE!! ^_^ i'm really liking this story. it's adorable and you're writing it very well! please update soon!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 05:29 CST
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Nah that okay about the whole Sess thing. Just as long they don't talk to stupidly to one another, it's all good. Great update, and I wonder why Kagome fainted. *squels in excitement* I can't wait for the next chappie!!! ;) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: xAyameKaiousx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 02:22 CST
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hey, I'm a first fanfic writer too...so yeah...I'm not being mean...lol I like the story alot it's really good!
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Reviewed By: xAyameKaiousx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 02:20 CST
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um...Inuyasha is too nice...he still has a gruff attitude I think you should of like made him alittle meaner...
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, great update. And yes you do have fans ;-). Great story, can't wait for the next chappie!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i didnt reveiw 4 the 3 chapter i had to get off the internet and have been grounded until 2day. well they are really good so far i cant wait till the chapters. you should totally write a lot more please, please, please hurry and post the next chapter. star555555528
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey a new writer, cool, lol. Anyhoo, great start off so far. This story sounds promising. I can't wait till the next update. Great first try... -TrinityK
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Title: wut a jip
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 07:28 CST
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Oh that's not fair. I write 6 pages in Word Processor and it only comes to be 3 on here. What a jip. Oh well, I guess I'll just have to write more pages in Word. And oh yeah, don't be surprised at my fast updates, they'll usually never be more than a day or 2 apart. ^.~ l8ter
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Kitsy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*mouth drops open in shock* So.. Many.. UPDATES! *goes catonic* I LUV THIS FIC! YAY! CONTINUE~! This is a really good first time fic. Is this your first ever fic or your first Inuyasha fic? Ooer! *huggles Inu* He's so cute in this~! Inu: *whimpers* Kagome... *cries* HE DOESN'T LUV ME! Kag: No he doesn't. *huggles Inu* Inu: *smiles* Alas, it was not meant to be. *sighs* NEwho, hope you enjoyed this! Ba-bye now!
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Reviewed By: ca4151 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 21:18 CST
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i really like the story so far. keep it coming!
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Title: I'm back!
Reviewed By: Kitsy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Recognition! I still love this fic! And *GASP* YOU UPDATE!!!! *hugs you* YOU ARE WONDERFUL! *skips happily around Bob the computer* CONTINUE! CONTINUE!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well im reveiwing again 4 ur 2nd chapter. It was really great i want 2 find out what happens. so please please please hurry and post the next chapter. ur a great writer. star555555528
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great story so far you should keep it going. i wuv ur plot. plaese get chapter 2 up soon. star555555528
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Title: Kitsy
Reviewed By: Kitsy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It always looks like that when you first load it. No worries. It looks fine now. I likee. You are literate, can spell people's names, and it looks like you have a great plot on your hands. Please continue! :D
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Title: Sorry Sorry
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 13:36 CST
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For anyone who read that, sorry. Something must have happened when I uploaded it. I'll try to make chap 2 not so weird lookin.^^
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