| "Demon Day Care" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: my bad...
Reviewed By: Spygirl3034 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oops my bad, i forgot to give u sum ratings *nervos laugh*
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Reviewed By: Spygirl3034 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 17:00 CST
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kick ass story, i liked ur last ch. i would of liked more inu and kag time but thats just me, ur storyis rockin' me likei. keep up the very good work, update soon plz
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 13:26 CST
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lmao. i didn't think this chapter sucked at all. in fact, i was giggling through the entire ren/sess deal. :P that was so cute!! lmao. and i lurve inuyasha. *sighs* hehe. nice job. ^_^ can't wait to see what else you have cooked up!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 04:22 CST
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Well... This chapter wasn't crappy persay... Look on the bright side, at leasr you introduced Rin and her spunk right? That's a good thing. And it really wasn't bad, it just mainly focused on Inu and Sess... Next chappie, more Kaggie and Inu k? More fluff. And about the whole trilogy love thing, maybe you could make Inu and Kag a little longer than the rest cus their the main characters, and the other ones can have a small amount of chapters like you said. Just a suggesttion... Other than that, decent/good update. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 17:55 CST
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NICE!! ^_^ i'm really liking this story. it's adorable and you're writing it very well! please update soon!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 05:29 CST
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Nah that okay about the whole Sess thing. Just as long they don't talk to stupidly to one another, it's all good. Great update, and I wonder why Kagome fainted. *squels in excitement* I can't wait for the next chappie!!! ;) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: xAyameKaiousx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 02:22 CST
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hey, I'm a first fanfic writer too...so yeah...I'm not being mean...lol I like the story alot it's really good!
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Reviewed By: xAyameKaiousx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 02:20 CST
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um...Inuyasha is too nice...he still has a gruff attitude I think you should of like made him alittle meaner...
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, great update. And yes you do have fans ;-). Great story, can't wait for the next chappie!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i didnt reveiw 4 the 3 chapter i had to get off the internet and have been grounded until 2day. well they are really good so far i cant wait till the chapters. you should totally write a lot more please, please, please hurry and post the next chapter. star555555528
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey a new writer, cool, lol. Anyhoo, great start off so far. This story sounds promising. I can't wait till the next update. Great first try... -TrinityK
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Title: wut a jip
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 07:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh that's not fair. I write 6 pages in Word Processor and it only comes to be 3 on here. What a jip. Oh well, I guess I'll just have to write more pages in Word. And oh yeah, don't be surprised at my fast updates, they'll usually never be more than a day or 2 apart. ^.~ l8ter
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Kitsy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*mouth drops open in shock* So.. Many.. UPDATES! *goes catonic* I LUV THIS FIC! YAY! CONTINUE~! This is a really good first time fic. Is this your first ever fic or your first Inuyasha fic? Ooer! *huggles Inu* He's so cute in this~! Inu: *whimpers* Kagome... *cries* HE DOESN'T LUV ME! Kag: No he doesn't. *huggles Inu* Inu: *smiles* Alas, it was not meant to be. *sighs* NEwho, hope you enjoyed this! Ba-bye now!
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Reviewed By: ca4151 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 21:18 CST
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i really like the story so far. keep it coming!
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Title: I'm back!
Reviewed By: Kitsy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Recognition! I still love this fic! And *GASP* YOU UPDATE!!!! *hugs you* YOU ARE WONDERFUL! *skips happily around Bob the computer* CONTINUE! CONTINUE!
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