"Inuyasha's True love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Aus_Inu_fan_chick [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 17:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: hey, this is pretty cool! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOOONNNN!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEAS PLEASE NOW NOW NOW!! lOl luvz Kathy
| Reviewed By: bettychan On: November 26, 2005 17:38 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm sorry, but I don't get it either. For one thing, with all the dialogue running together like you have it, it's very, very hard to know who is saying what. There's no descriptions, no action, just talk.
| Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 21:31 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: what the heak was that? a paragraph? where's the story? I don't get it.
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