| "The 2 Great Swords" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Oh no!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did they all take a drink from the Martydom springs? I swear, none of them seem to find themselves in good situations. Inuyasha's going to be pissed when he wakes up and finds that she's with Koga. I kinda wished Kagome had made Koga move her because she has to know that giving herself to Koga is the worse thing that could happen to her. *sigh* The suspense is gonna kill me. Another excellent chapter and I'm just dying to read more. I love this story!
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Title: Martyrs
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 22:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Guess everyone wants to sacrifice for the team, eh? Hope they escape relatively unscathed or Kagome and Inuyasha will never forgive themselves. Wonder why Inuyasha can't use the sword of light? I'm sure you'll tell us soon because they need the sword quickly. Oh I wish Kouga would die...but then that would take away a major antagonist. Oh well...can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is sesshomaru in this?
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Title: He's Alive!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I'm truly enjoying this story and I eagerly await your updates. I liked the reunion scene with Shippo, Kagome and Inuyasha--it was very touching. Then there was sensitive Inuyasha--who knew that he would be able to comfort Kagome so effectively. Too bad she didn't know when to stop with her healing ability because I have a feeling that Inuyasha being human is definitely not good right now.
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Title: He's Not Dead!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that your fic doesn't have any reviews. This story is an enjoyable read. The characters are well-written, the battle scenes are great (I'm jealous--I can't write battle scenes at all), and the story line is a pretty original take on the anime. Your writing style is easy to read, there are no glaring spelling or grammar mistakes, and I find myself genuinely interested in what happens next to the characters. I read the whole story in one sitting. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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