| ""Take Her"" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: G_lyn On: October 20, 2006 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
hihi! That was more than just interesting! please continue to write more! i've been waiting for the next chap for so long! *hint hint* but thanks for writing such fics, and i really hope you'll continue to do well. ja~
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Title: not bad
Reviewed By: LadyInTheMist [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, not bad at all. I advise you to go over your spelling and grammer. It is sometimes harder to follow because some of your sentances sound funny. Other then that, i like it. Its really original and it made me want to read all of it. I do have one question though. How old are Inuyasha's children? If you had mentioned it already, sorry i missed it.
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Reviewed By: nubian_rose On: March 13, 2006 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome, crazy! although u do have spelling mistakes (i keep telling u 2 e-mail me the chapter and let me beta read it *rolls eyes*)i finally saw the tarzan video! it was hilarious! (i am jane and i like to ride an elephant!) if by some chace u read this b4 2morrw, please bring my chapter w. u. i meant to get it @lunch, but i 4got. lol weird
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Reviewed By: INUYASHA4U [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a wonderful personality through youre writing. Its just that you have to make the chapters longer and don't change the subject from sesshormuru to kagome and inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: A anime fan girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Woah... cool story! Update soon! Oh, and I juss realized something... we have the same birthday. No joke, my birthday is on October 26th, and urs is... too lol. But not the year. I'm a bit younger (yay for me i guess?). That's kind of creepy, don't u think? ~~~+++****&&&&%%%$$$##@@418@@##%%%&&&&****+ ++~~~
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