| "Flipped" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Lillith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2002 16:06 CST
Comment/Review:
thia and the previous comment were made by Drama Queen, not lillith |
Reviewed By: Lillith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2002 16:05 CST
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hey. look, i don't think i'm gonna update on this fic any more. i have no desire to, and i've started other fics that i like much better. you can find me on fanfiction.net under the pen name Porter Conlon. i'm now writing about a movie called Newsies, check it out, please. PEACE |
Reviewed By: D.Q. On: March 12, 2002 20:05 CST
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yeah i know it's kinda messed up, but for my first fic i think it's ok... hopefully they'll get better as i go on ^-^ |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2002 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is not a flame but I don't think you should have given Bulma her memory back that quick, plus the thing with going back to the weakling was a bit odd seeing as how she remembered evry thing... well maybe she didn't remember that? Any way plese continue soon. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2002 17:13 CST
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man that was hilarious!! he impregnated her.. hahah ok you can't leave it there.. write more soon.. :) |
Reviewed By: Drama Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2002 15:01 CST
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now Katt, be nice. Kuuketsuki, err, Rabidus Femina, err, Jenni, isn't a loser.(well, not totally) anyhoo, PLZ REVIEW to all you ppl who read and don't review. oh, and i think i got the format problem fixed, so let me know what ya think. suggestions are welcome^-^ |
Reviewed By: Katt On: February 20, 2002 14:46 CST
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hehehe....ramma lamma ding dong is a funny word! ok, well, i dont know much about DBZ but that was funny ^.~
P.S. Jenni's a loser |
Reviewed By: Kyuuketsuki On: February 20, 2002 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! VEGGIE KITTY VEGGIE KITTY! ::kicks feet happily before falling into a coughing fit, and off her chair:: owwies... Ooh...a funny lemon, just what the doctor ordered! ::grins evilly:: I like Bulma....but...Poor Veggie-poo! hehe...couch... ::passes out:: |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 20, 2002 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL-poor Veggie, he's so confused, and won't Bulma be pissed off when she finds out she's gonna be a mommy. Write more soon. Peace |
Reviewed By: Kyuuketsuki On: February 10, 2002 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry...I grade hard, and MM.org is confusing to me... O.o ::is a FF.net girl til the end:: Wheee! [insert shameless plug to her FF.net page] Rabidus Femina, Go! Lots of strange goodiness... ::looks at the FF.net DBZ page:: Crap... ::looks to your story:: ...Funny as hell.... POST ON FF.NET AND SAVE IT! Aiiiiiieeee! ::runs around:: It's dying, it needs your story! wai wai! ^^v |
Reviewed By: Drama Queen On: February 10, 2002 08:10 CST
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OK, OK, i know that i screwed up on the formatting... i'm trying to fix it, jus give me a break ppl......it is my first fic on the net!::glares at kyuuketsuki:: |
Reviewed By: Rabidus Femina On: February 05, 2002 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I laughed the WHOLE WAY THROUGH! Alyssa, you are the BEST DBZ fanfic author I've seen in a while....which...isn't saying much...since...I'm not a huge DBZ fan...but...It's the thought that counts, right? ^^; Love ya, babe,
"RF" |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 05, 2002 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! I love this, you have got to continue this truly different B/V get together. Very funny fic. Update soon please. Peace |
Reviewed By: Rika On: February 04, 2002 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Please make more chapters! I wanna read more! More more more!!!!!! Hehe, very nice, very nice!^_^ |
