| "Dark Temptations Inn" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: MewtwoStruckBack [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! This is just great work here |
Reviewed By: Heelro_san On: August 02, 2002 08:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy enjoyed... your fic ::shiver shiver::
no it was realy good, i liked your style of writing very observent, almost feels like im playing resi or silent hill, dunno why, but yeah, you should be proud of this fic :) |
Reviewed By: Bingo On: July 20, 2002 15:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this story. I'd like it alot more, if only it were finished. But, seeing as I like horror stories a whole lot, this one scored big props with me. Have to love all the bloody scenes. And zombies? Dude. You're too cool. ^.^ Almost makes me want to finish my own stories I started so long ago. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Silver On: July 19, 2002 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a good fanfic but it had A LOT of grammer problems. Finish it soon. |
Reviewed By: nikhilr On: June 25, 2002 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fanfic alot!!!! You made alot of errors and you left me hanging!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Grey Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2002 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm. Well now. This is certainly a interesting start to what I'm sure is an interesting story. It's really late right now, otherwise I'd read more. Again, really great way to start a story. Sure there'll be a spectacular finish! |
Reviewed By: FyreVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 23:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Um. sorry that I messed up on that last one and put my name ^_^ *blushes* Sorry...
And that spelling isn't as bad as I thought .... hmmm.
E-mail me again Dark i'm Digital_Diva4000@yahoo.com
BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: FyreVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good but like the others said spelling!!!!!!!!!!
I liked it overall.... |
Reviewed By: Black Epiphany On: March 02, 2002 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well. To start with, it was pretty interesting. A few..no... A LOT of grammer and spelling mistakes, but beyond that, not bad.
It's about 1:00 on the morning, so I was looking over my shoulder every once in a while.
Not bad. Not bad at all. But I'd like you to finish the damn thing.
B.E. |
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2002 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first couple chapters had some trip ups, mostly structure and tense errors, but the later chapters got much better. The only thing that seemed to kind of bug me was that it feels like it follows one of those cheesy twistaplot scripts or RPG video games where you go around, find items and go on to the next level. The suspense and darkness kept me interested though, and I'd like to see more of this fic. |
Reviewed By: Dark Illusions On: February 20, 2002 09:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Heeey.. my spelling and grammer are good! :/! |
Reviewed By: Tofu On: February 19, 2002 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not going to sleep for a week... |
