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| "Mizerable" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Tainted On: January 19, 2006 08:32 CST
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I know the chapter was long, but I was like wow it is over already. It just flowed so beautifully. *Swats Ashura* Ohs Ashura is good. Damn manipulative bastard! I felt the need to swat him quite a few times. I felt bad for Fai and Kurogane... both so badly wanting to get to know each other, yet being pulled apart by Ashura. Man Asura is good with the psychological (Oy, big ass word, falls off chair) warfare. Wonderful chapter. Need more... soon!
| Reviewed By: kai's grrl On: January 09, 2006 18:20 CST
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nice. like the concept though kurogane seems occ. please update soon. i can't wait to read.
| Reviewed By: Tainted Desires NLI On: November 16, 2005 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awws, I felt bad for Fai, when Ashura quit making love to him, and was in the end basically using him for sex. Then how Ashura was acting when Kurogane showed up. Ohhs but that last part, I canNOT wait to see more of this!! Damn cliffy! *swats the fk out of it* (Shifty eyes)
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