| "Blood Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: ahsayuni2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 04:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is ok. I have read better. And why did Sesshomaru wig out over blood. I mean come on it was just sissy little Kagome. (Sorry for the Kagome fans. I just don't like her.) But over all it was ok.
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Title: Blood Lust
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: New story
Reviewed By: InuZWMN0729 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 22:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Well this is a new fan fic of mine. It's just something I'm doing for fun. Nothing too serious...I hope you like. Please review. Everything is acccepted...except flames. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 21:09 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a fun story so far. You have some interesting twists going on and I look forward to seeing how things work out. Especially how the Sesshy/Kagome/Inu-Yasha thing goes. Your wording and grammer could use some work but I understood everything just fine. I hope to see an update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 11:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erm... Are you a new author or something? I hope that is so, but your chapters are so small! You should really consider putting in more descriptive details in order to see what's going on, and not only that but your story is choppy, think more about the transition from one paragraph to the next a bit more. Then you also need to mix up your sentence structures, as the majority of your story is dialogue I realize this is difficult. So less tell, more show! Show us what's happening instead of having someone say what's going on.
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