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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 00:03 EDT
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I have read this story atleast 5 times but it was on my cell so i couldnt reveiw. I love the story very interesting. i hate the idea of vocies in my head so id prople have to be put in a pillow room just to keep my self alive. i love how everyone is trying to help i hope Vegeta relize that he is loved far more ten he thinks. Im glad goku did not give up on being with vegeta like most would. his anger is a pain i would have to kill him off if i was any other of his alters. well cant wait for the next chepter. thought im shoure that reading a story about someone loosing there mind is tourter to some one like me how already lost ther mined.
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Title: THANK YOU!!!
Reviewed By: Empty Saiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2009 00:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much! I thought I had it bad when I lost my net and comp for a month! I've been waiting a long time for the latest chapter, I'm glad that after so long you came back to it when most writers abandon their fics. Very enjoyable, and story is progressing well. I like that I cant predict exactly where this story is going and whats going on! lol :) Cant wait for the next xhapter, hopefully Gohan's doctor friends sheds some light onto the situation...
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Title: kinda late
Reviewed By: renaena On: September 26, 2008 22:17 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that I am very late on reviewing this work .. but OMG its really original and creative and I got to last chapter that you posted and I'm like .. oh noooo theres no more !! please update soon .. this story has been progessing quite well and I enjoyed reading it ... UPDATE !! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE ^_^
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Title: Zofo
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 19:23 EDT
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It seems Vegeta's really starting to lose it and the episodes are happening more frequently and with stronger effects, how much longer can he hold out? Didn't seem to me that Gohan knew what is wrong with him as he's still learning but maybe he can consult other doctors. I like how you write Goku's concern for his Prince and at the same time him battling his feelings. What will he think of Vegeta hitting on Trunks? I hope he can get past it as he realises Vegeta wasn't himself. Thanks for updating.
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Title: More! Please... ??
Reviewed By: Empty Saiya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 00:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is coming along nicely, I can't wait to find out what happens. Praise all round for it/you. Hm, reasoning behind rating... Suspenseful, has a good plot which alot of fics are missing these days, the spelling/grammar and overall writing style is near perfect so you can read through it without having to go back and re-read. PLease update soon, I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: December 26, 2007 18:31 EST
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Oh things are really hotting up aren't they. Felt for Goku there when Vegeta touched him after the shower, glad he didn't give in to his desires though as I'm sure it would have ruined things with Vegeta. Will Gohan be able to help him? Still loving the story and hope for a new chapter after Xmas.
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Title: Yeah to updates
Reviewed By: Azmidiske [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 13:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story, one of the best "crazy" Vegeta tales by a long shot. I read it months ago and ended up reading it all again when I saw an update, I'm so glad you haven't abandoned it. It's well written, thoughtful, and Intelligently orchestrated. Everyones dialogs and actions are in character, and I just love how the plot is spinning. I'm glad Vegeta finally understands what's going on with him, and I hope someday I'll get to see him admit his problems and overcome them. Don't let your muse die now; this story is so exciting and moving. Excellent work.
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: November 04, 2007 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating. Hope Goku has a chance to reveal his feelings to Vegeta, or one of his other personalities. Liked the mirror scene when Vegeta saw them. I really like this story and hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonSin On: November 03, 2007 21:59 EDT
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Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can't wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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Reviewed By: Wooga On: February 13, 2007 16:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what it is about this story, but I really like it. the computer at my house is broken so I have to sneak off to a computer lab in college to read it when I can. It seems to be an alternate universe with all the female characters missing-which is okay, I guess, since you want to focus on the male characters. I think this makes it focus a little TOO much on all their relationships. I think it would be better if only one of the couples had to 'come out of the closte', so to speak... I mean, it's not the same if Goku already sent off one of his sons to live with Piccolo, but if only one of his sons were gay, it would be more dramatic. Sorry for rambling, it's just that the story seem like it's a little hard to end now. Please don't write yourself into a corner, okay? :) It seems Vejita's schizophrenia is getting worse and worse, I hope he's all right. :) Thanks for writing it.
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 09:55 EST
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oh no!!! this story is really great update soon i wanna kno how crazy vegeta can get
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 16:50 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like this. I hope you update soon. There's another story out there that deals with voices in Bejita's head but it's in a different context. I really like yours because I actually understand what's going on. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 10:22 EST
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Thanks for the shoutout ^^ I loved this chapter. I loved how you seperated the voices into their own little "spaces" if you can call it that, and gave them their own personalities. I'm really looking forward to hearing from"orange Vegeta. That should be interesting, ne? I'll be here waiting again until your next chapter ^^ *waits ever so patiently*
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 13:24 EST
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Oh man ... getting from bad to worse. Everyone's lives are being thrown out of wack by Vegeta and his problems. Thank you for that chapter ^^ Update again, please. I'm liking this story.
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Title: Nice ...
Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 15:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story ^^ I love the originality. *huggles Vegeta* Poor Veggie T.T Write me some more, please. I'm waiting patiently for an update.
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