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| "Stealing Time" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: Nancy103 On: July 29, 2012 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just found this story and it is SO good! Very well written and thought out. Showing the love of a son for his father, like Vegeta, was done perfectly. Please update when you can! | Title: Two Thumbs Up
Reviewed By: Azmidiske [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2012 03:15 EDT
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How lovely a new chapter. Thank you, glad your interest is back into the story, always good to hear. After reading this story again, (yeah its probably been like 5-6 times over the years), I can really see your writing improvement progress through the story. You’ve really outdone yourself with these latest chapters. Better dialog, a little more inner thoughts and emphasis on the minor details. Character interaction felt more engaged as well. Was quite the enjoyable read. I’ve spent hours pondering where your going with it, perhaps more so then with many stories left open for years. Guess I’m fearful of an unhappy ending since that’s how most “insane” stories seem to end. Hardly looks like you’re going that route, but the hurtles left to jump in getting there seem so tall. I saw you offered spoilers but would rather wait for the pleasure of seeing it. I’m just patient like that, even if I’ll be waiting years. :). Thanks so much for the great story. Also glad to hear you’ll be posting on other sites, this one is kind of dying down in popularity, and this story is quite the gem, hidden among that desert of madness we fan ficcers pass off as stories, lol. Thanks again! I sense many climactic things building in this story, no pun intended, can’t wait to witness them blow up on poor Vegeta’s psyche. Peace; Azmidiske | Reviewed By: nellied14 On: January 09, 2012 17:34 EST
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AHHHH!!! I'm so happy about the new chapter! Love how the plot is coming about. But I beg of you! PLEASE don't keep me in suspense for long, it was pure torture because I enjoy this story so much. | Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: Azmidiske Not Logged In On: December 27, 2011 15:41 EST
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Thanks so much for the update! I was so excited to see more! I'm glad Kakarot's admittence went smoothly, and the conversation amoung the alters was very interesting, for once Vegeta getting to see his actions outside of his control. This chapter definitely moved things forward. Hopefully i'll hear more in the next few months. Thanks again! Love your tale! | Title: Back Again
Reviewed By: Azmidiske [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2011 13:09 EST
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5 years later and I'm still here, adoring this story. There is no DID/Multiple Personality Disorder story as good as this one in the whole DBZ fandom, I've looked. :D Someday I hope to see more, and pray you haven't given up on this tale. I wrote this huge 500 word reveiw after re-reading it again about a month ago, but now I lack the guts to post it. Maybe I'll email it to you one day. :D. Thanks again for the enrapturing story. | Title: tracybrat
Reviewed By: Tracybrat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2011 20:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed this story very much. I can't wait to see what happens next. Read my stories under tracybrat. review and let me know if you like mine. | Reviewed By: Stednie0514 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2011 20:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY LORD! I was soooo stoked to see an update!!! And I just now had time to read it! This just keeps getting better and better! Poor Vegeta though. He always gets the sucky end of the stick, or mind in this story lol. Anyways keep up the fantastic work and hopefully you'll update soon cause I'm anxious yet excited to see what you do next! Thanks for the update! | Reviewed By: Empty Saiya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fanfic!! Thank you so much for posting a new chapter, I started reading this some time ago and have enjoyed each new update (even if it means waiting) for it, well worth it! I love that you haven't given up on this fic as many writers do when their lives become to hectic, especially since this is a highly original concept in the dbz achives. Happy New Year, best wishes. | Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 00:39 EDT
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vageta is such an ass and he is so going to mack himself worst. but one must mack mistacks to lern. cant whait to see what happens.
| Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 20:28 EST
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Oh dear, now Vegeta has been given a full bill of health in his eyes, he will be most reluctant to any therapy :( At least all the others are aware of his problem now. Glad Goku is not giving up on him :)
| Title: Cool
Reviewed By: AEN [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 07:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. So I'm not as seasoned as your other reviewers, I've been reading for a year, I think, but I love this story. It's well written, original, and pretty in-depth, too. Keep it up, and man, keep us sucked in, cause I will not rest until I read the entire thing! ;) Thank you for taking your time and working hard to write an awesomely interesting story, and sorry it took so long to review.
| Reviewed By: shadowtraced [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 04:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I have to say, you managed to suck me into this fic just by the summary and first chapter. I love the concept of Vegeta going through psychological turmoil and even had an idea for a fic where Vegeta suffers from Dissociative Identity Disorder (or as it was once called, Multiple Personality Disorder.) There's something incredibly fascinating (yet sad) about it that I've been juggling the idea around in my head for a while, but never really came across a fic like it until now. First, I'd like to say that I think you really do a good job at playing off the different personalities as they voice their opinions inside of Vegeta's head. They're all very different emotions/aspects of Vegeta, yet when they're all speaking, the dialogue seems to flow really well. I really get that sense of 'voices in your head'. However, there was something which left me feeling a bit unsure. Vegeta's new personality of "lust" took me for surprise, which I found to be refreshing. However, I'm not sure how I felt about Trunks' response to his father's unknowing advances on him. I suppose I was expecting a bit more surprise and complete shock out of him than what was given. (And the same would probably apply to Goten.) Overall, however, I find this to be a creative twist on the DB world. I like the drama and angst and hope you will be able to continue and eventually finish this. Thanks for sticking with it after so many years. :)
| Title: Reviews Reviews Reviews
Reviewed By: Azmidiske [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 04:40 EDT
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I haven't left a review on this story since November of 07? Man does time fly. This is one of only three stories actively being worked on that I wait enthusiastically for an update on. Just read the last chapter again, I remember being surprised when the "Lust" alter made his first appearance, didn't actually see that coming, but should have known. *Winks in a twitchy and disturbing manner* Can't wait to read more! Just like so many other stories, it keeps me up at night wondering what will happen next. You feel things could be predictable, in a good way, but you never know when those sneaky little authors will throw you for a loop. Greatly looking forward to the angst of a good trip to the hospital, if they can succeed in dragging mentally unstable little Vegeta there that is. Great job on this story! Riveting till the bitter end! Wish I could leave a review of more value to your muse, but it's been a while since reading the previous chapters. Update soon! I'll be waiting. *Sneaky Grin*
| Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 13:11 EDT
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They know. Vageta wont be happyy bout that oh well its for his own good. What coused the M.Ps?
| Title: Stunned =)
Reviewed By: ladyindis [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Linkin, this is phenenomenal writing! I just read this story in it's entirety, and I'm exhausted, but... I am very much looking forward to the next chapter :) This is fascinating stuff; truly different than any other DBZ fic I've read. I hope that Vegeta gets better soon! I don't have very much experience with MPD, so I'm finding this... astonishing. Once again, I love your work, and I hope to get a chance to read more soon :D
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