| "My Son" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: My Son
Reviewed By: Blazing Sky On: January 08, 2006 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The second chapter was a good read, I hope you do update this story as I will certainly continue to read your updates.
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Title: I agree
Reviewed By: bakaden not signed in) On: November 29, 2005 12:34 CST
Comment/Review:
An interesting point of view! I like it! I always wondered about that last quote, and what it really meant... anyhow, I agree with my friend. A follow up, please, you must! XD
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Title: Hn
Reviewed By: SunDrop On: November 29, 2005 12:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes yes, I believe a follow up is in order. A follow up please, you must, b/c this was very very satisfying to read. ^-^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: fl00fy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was truly deep. So she really does love her son. Well you sure as heck convenced me. She should have been able to portray her love better. But all it boils down to was that ahe really didn't love Kyo enough by making him suffer with her death. Kyo lovd his mother as any other child would love their parent he just didn't understand her feelings of being diffrent. She also didn't understand the Kyo would believe that it was his fault the his mother killed herself. Poor Kyon-Kyon
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Reviewed By: Meagan On: November 19, 2005 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that was so sad...! I'm crying...! But I've always wondered the same thing, like: 'but...she's his mom...! She has to love him like a parent!' Well, you know what I mean. But that was definitely an awesome 'interlude', and you really should write a follow-up!
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