| "Two unknown brothers one father...." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Two Unknown Brothers One Father....
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: anime_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i read both chapters and i thought it was ok...BUT you could have put more into the chapter and you could have had more details but other than that it was great and i like the idea.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!! but could u make the chapter longer!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 20:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it so far. I hope that you continue with the story.
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