| "Wrath of Washuu" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: sg123animekid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought this was an amaxing hentai fic the sex was great. Ryoko is so hot. All the Tenchi Muyo girll turn me on. there should diffinetly be a sequal
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Title: washu's wrath
Reviewed By: Amagasaki! On: February 12, 2005 05:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry for the multiple reviews. i had trouble with the spam filter thing. please delete the extras
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Title: washu's wrath
Reviewed By: Amagasaki! On: February 12, 2005 05:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! that was hot! i wish it was adult washu screwing tenchi instead of little washu. ayeka is a bdsm dominatrix! tenchi's been a naughty boy and ayeka's gonna spank for his bare behind with her bare hands! what will washu do with tenchi's sperm? what if the girls all got pregnant?
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Reviewed By: Amagasaki! On: February 12, 2005 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! that was hot! i wish it was adult washu screwing tenchi instead of little washu. ayeka is a bdsm dominatrix! tenchi's been a naughty boy and ayeka's gonna spank for his bare behind with her bare hands! what will washu do with tenchi's sperm? what if the girls all got pregnant?
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Reviewed By: Amagasaki! On: February 12, 2005 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! that was hot! i wish it was adult washu screwing tenchi instead of little washu. ayeka is a bdsm dominatrix! tenchi's been a naughty boy and ayeka's gonna spank for his bare behind with her bare hands! what will washu do with tenchi's sperm? what if the girls all got pregnant?
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Reviewed By: Amagasaki! On: February 12, 2005 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! that was hot! i wish it was adult washu screwing tenchi instead of little washu. ayeka is a bdsm dominatrix! tenchi's been a naughty boy and ayeka's gonna spank for his bare behind with her bare hands! what will washu do with tenchi's sperm? what if the girls all got pregnant?
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Reviewed By: Happyskull [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know, I've run this through the spell-checker multiple times and double-checked it for improperly used words. No problem. No idea why people keep saying the spelling is bad in this. Perhaps I didn't spell the character names in the preferred fashion?
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Reviewed By: ~*~*~Ryoko~*~*~ On: June 04, 2003 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you were right, it was a lemon. Quite good though. |
Reviewed By: Lionheart On: April 12, 2003 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was nice. It needed an edit. The spelling was horrible. What was with the fucking machine? Did the tentacles have orgasms? |
Reviewed By: Kristin On: April 13, 2002 13:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Although sex is VERY important, it's better with a little more plotline. Otherwise, it gets kind of boring. |
