Reviewed By: Vitaralastla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 04:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic, but... Shame on you for being so mean to poor Neji! Seriously, it almost made me cry... and that doesn't happen! Ever! ... So you did good... to make me cry... *sniff* Anyway, good ficcy! P.S. At the risk of sounding like a creepy dork who once upon a time wanted to be a forensic psychologist, you can actually remain alive for about 15 minutes without air... you only pass-out at about 8... Movie two-second choke-scenes really aren't accurate, but who the hell wants to watch that for 15 minutes? Back to the point, good fic! Write more! XP Vitaralastla
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