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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 08:57 EST
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lOVES IT!!!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 00:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story so far. The drama is really building. I found myself so hoping that Naraku would just OD or something. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 05:16 EST
Comment/Review:
Love it! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 15:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 08:01 EST
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I wonder who the human is... update soon!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 09:15 EST
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Love it!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: maketchup1018(not signed in) On: December 03, 2006 01:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fiction. By the way, I noticed a spelling error in this sentence, in chapter 1: "Vuitton purse, while pulling out her wallet and franticly going through her bills..." It is spelled frantically Hehehe! Well Im still reading the story but Im getting very excited!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 00:19 EDT
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OMG I can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 11:27 EDT
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RUN INUYASHA RUN (run forest run) haha! Update sooN!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 09:01 EDT
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LOves it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: KAZ1167 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya know, i really enjoy this story. i hope your update will work at some point... please try again!
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 01:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... not bad. Done and done again, but even then, you manage to write something different than the rest... Your grammar and spelling could use a little work, though it's passable. This story draws my attention, so I will watch for more updates: Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 00:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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the story is well done. i don't really think i've read a stranded type of story with such a fiery Kagome. very well done. i'm looking forward to seeing both king and queen have to hack it without the modern necessities on this island, because if they are both packing LV and Armani, they come from nice money. very well done. i have to say though, and this is an all time first, i don't like your Kagome. she's very...bitchy. i get it in the first chapter that she's really against inu for god knows what reason besides for the 'i like you so i'm gonna go to the far extreme and pretend to hate you. please love me' deal. it's interesting. i'm more interested to see inu break her. making her clean the bird was wonderful! very well done! i just...i don't know. i'm rooting for inu in this. (and good job with the one liners of his sexy lingo). keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Az On: November 21, 2005 00:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol OMG!! loved it ^_^ pleeeeeez write more, i really really REALLY loved it, sotryline sound kawaii ^^
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Reviewed By: bk On: November 20, 2005 00:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Please keep writing
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