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| "Stranded" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 00:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
the story is well done. i don't really think i've read a stranded type of story with such a fiery Kagome. very well done. i'm looking forward to seeing both king and queen have to hack it without the modern necessities on this island, because if they are both packing LV and Armani, they come from nice money. very well done. i have to say though, and this is an all time first, i don't like your Kagome. she's very...bitchy. i get it in the first chapter that she's really against inu for god knows what reason besides for the 'i like you so i'm gonna go to the far extreme and pretend to hate you. please love me' deal. it's interesting. i'm more interested to see inu break her. making her clean the bird was wonderful! very well done! i just...i don't know. i'm rooting for inu in this. (and good job with the one liners of his sexy lingo). keep it up!!!
| Reviewed By: Az On: November 21, 2005 00:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol OMG!! loved it ^_^ pleeeeeez write more, i really really REALLY loved it, sotryline sound kawaii ^^
| Reviewed By: bk On: November 20, 2005 00:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Please keep writing
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