| "The Killer In Me Is The Killer In You" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: DARK SIN On: June 14, 2011 09:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im so speechless I was hanging onto every word that you wrote. I love how Trunks was able to understand and accept that he is Saiyan!!!! Loved how you wrote Vegeta it fit him perfectly!!! |
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2010 22:02 EDT
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This is like the tenth time I've read this and it's still my all time favorite oneshot. You ever think about maybe continuing this story? It would be interesting to say the least. Once again, I love this story. =)
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Reviewed By: surmise On: August 08, 2009 04:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was absolutely amazing. You hit it straight on with Vegeta- at least what I've interpreted of him from the manga/anime. A part of me would love to think that he does love Bulma and their children, but at the same time... Considering the whole Majin arc, it leaves a lot to be said. You've captured it though and so well.
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Reviewed By: ilex9 not logged On: May 07, 2006 22:01 EDT
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Nice. No warm fuzzies here. I wonder how long before Trunks is off to visit some "uninhabited island."
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Title: Chilling and good
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 17:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an EXCELLENT delve into Vegeta's character. To think that he can still be the SAME while living on earth, you captured him thinking in very non human terms and that's very difficult! I enjoy your perspective on Saiyan culture and Vegeta's intepretation of it as beign proud of Trunk's 'first kill'. Makes sense to me from what Raditz and Nappa were like.
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Reviewed By: akjfanv;a On: December 14, 2005 21:01 EST
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wow, that was intense, and pretty dark! ehehe... I liked it, it was something different, and extremely well written, like most of your stories are! cant wait on the updates of everything else.
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: pisq On: December 14, 2005 14:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That reminded me why I love your stories so much! I don't think ANYONE else can capture the real Vegeta like you! Blast! He's not tamed, nor ever will be! I just loved this! I can't believe it took me so long to read it!
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Reviewed By: Rowina On: November 23, 2005 17:46 EST
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You hit it on the head with this one. It's a lovely change from the typical "Saiyans as pissy humans" characterization. I really like the way Trunks so readily accepts the true nature of his Saiyan side, and doesn't beat himself up too much about it. Savage.
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Reviewed By: 6541987 On: November 21, 2005 18:07 EST
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this fic is cute in a very dark way
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Title: EleneK ( not logged in)
Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 18:04 EST
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Oh it was simply beautiful. I loved seeing Vegeta that way.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 12:23 EST
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*Hugs ol' Tempy 'til she turns blue* GAH I love you!!! I love that you actually GET what saiyans are!! I love that you don't think of them as slightly grumpy little bunnies who are really sweeties on the inside!! I love that you show this so vividly and perfectly! I love that you gave us this!! I love that you remind me why I do actually love Vegeta! I love that you are such a frigging awesome writer!! ... ... ... I'll love you even more if you get on with 'Hunter's Moon'... ^_^
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: November 21, 2005 09:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was freaking glorious. I love how evil that was. You definitely need to write some more! I miss having you update your stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitauri (not logged in) On: November 20, 2005 11:24 EST
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I swear, I honestly think this is one of your best stories to date. Beautifully written and so dark, so.....honest. Fucking brilliant as usual Tempest! ^___^
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Reviewed By: na na j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 20:26 EST
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I love how you worded the story. It was told very well. I'm always up for a dark one shot like this. Keep on writing. na na j
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Reviewed By: free-sprit (not logged in) On: November 19, 2005 04:34 EST
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Gosh... I really liked this one. I dunno what to think about Vegeta, I mean, I don't think that anyone is ever gonna find out wether or not he is good og bad, or if he loves Bulma and his family.. We're never gonan find out, are we? It's kinda downer. Ah well, I'll get over it. :P I loved it. I love your writing. keep it up.
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