| "The Killer In Me Is The Killer In You" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: akjfanv;a On: December 14, 2005 21:01 EST
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wow, that was intense, and pretty dark! ehehe... I liked it, it was something different, and extremely well written, like most of your stories are! cant wait on the updates of everything else.
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: pisq On: December 14, 2005 14:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That reminded me why I love your stories so much! I don't think ANYONE else can capture the real Vegeta like you! Blast! He's not tamed, nor ever will be! I just loved this! I can't believe it took me so long to read it!
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Reviewed By: Rowina On: November 23, 2005 17:46 EST
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You hit it on the head with this one. It's a lovely change from the typical "Saiyans as pissy humans" characterization. I really like the way Trunks so readily accepts the true nature of his Saiyan side, and doesn't beat himself up too much about it. Savage.
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Reviewed By: 6541987 On: November 21, 2005 18:07 EST
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this fic is cute in a very dark way
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 18:04 EST
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Oh it was simply beautiful. I loved seeing Vegeta that way.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 12:23 EST
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*Hugs ol' Tempy 'til she turns blue* GAH I love you!!! I love that you actually GET what saiyans are!! I love that you don't think of them as slightly grumpy little bunnies who are really sweeties on the inside!! I love that you show this so vividly and perfectly! I love that you gave us this!! I love that you remind me why I do actually love Vegeta! I love that you are such a frigging awesome writer!! ... ... ... I'll love you even more if you get on with 'Hunter's Moon'... ^_^
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: November 21, 2005 09:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was freaking glorious. I love how evil that was. You definitely need to write some more! I miss having you update your stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitauri (not logged in) On: November 20, 2005 11:24 EST
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I swear, I honestly think this is one of your best stories to date. Beautifully written and so dark, so.....honest. Fucking brilliant as usual Tempest! ^___^
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Reviewed By: na na j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 20:26 EST
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I love how you worded the story. It was told very well. I'm always up for a dark one shot like this. Keep on writing. na na j
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Reviewed By: free-sprit (not logged in) On: November 19, 2005 04:34 EST
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Gosh... I really liked this one. I dunno what to think about Vegeta, I mean, I don't think that anyone is ever gonna find out wether or not he is good og bad, or if he loves Bulma and his family.. We're never gonan find out, are we? It's kinda downer. Ah well, I'll get over it. :P I loved it. I love your writing. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 18:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this one!! please please will you write some more to the story please!!!! I thought it was great and I would like to see how trunks might change and if vegeta really cares for bulma or not so please please some more please!!! well think you for a great story!!!
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Reviewed By: Evanscent [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 17:17 EST
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Oooo, darkness! Gotta love the evil that IS Vegeta. I'm glad see it, feel it, and have shown it here. I almost feel bad for Trunks. Almost. Delightful story! I like these little one shots. =D -Keely
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Reviewed By: Ember (not signed in) On: November 18, 2005 11:32 EST
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Oh Tempest! I so love this story. I think all us Vegeta fangirls need a little wake up call now and then and this was done in the most fascinating way. So detached, but still so much emotion. Genius.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 10:42 EST
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DELICIOUSLY dark and imaginative. Baaaaaaad Vegeta. I love this one. The bit about the "Abnormal Psychology" class really was perfect!
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Reviewed By: Aallright On: November 18, 2005 05:39 EST
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that waz really good. total turn around for my usual stuff but really good. u gave people a wake up call to exactly how bad vegeta is and that we can't mistake that he could actually bereformed to what us humans deam moraly right
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