| "A Long Waiting" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: hinatalover On: September 18, 2008 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you sick twisted fuck how dare u do that to hinata and naruto i swear ur fucked up in the head doing that to them i mean come on at least have the gall to make it better dont u dare end it like that or i swear ill hunt u down and beat u till u fix it i mean come on it was good story till what u had neji do to poor hinata u sick fuck
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: stupidcupid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
.........awesome.............
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Title: ......
Reviewed By: HetLover1 On: June 15, 2006 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
You sick bastard!! They are cousins and u did a hentai wit them!It was kinda good though... you really should have gone more in the naru/hina direction but otherwise its a good story(hinata kicks ass!!)
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Title: From The Writer Again..
Reviewed By: shine_nagai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 11:01 CST
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Yea pals, a real bad2 news... i lost all of my fanfics data, so i have to work over it again... okay, now i;m working on chapter 5... please at least wait for the next weeks or some couple days after dat XD Thank you very much for the new reviewers RENEGADE ASASSIN (thx dude, but why in hell u used capsie? i hope it was because your really like my story XD), ej (i didn't expect being falemd, but i luv it anyhow XD), and Orphen (luv it if you luv it XD)and everyone who has read/going to read/has written Review, or going to write rev... as usual Doumo Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!
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Reviewed By: RENEGADE ASSASSIN On: February 08, 2006 14:57 CST
Comment/Review:
YOUR FIC IS GREAT. I AM A FAN OF NARUTO/HINATA BUT DO NOT SEE THE COUPLE ALOT. SO YOUR FIC ROCKS.
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Title: this is illegal
Reviewed By: ej On: January 28, 2006 16:07 CST
Comment/Review:
INCEST IS ILLEGAL AND THAT WAS DATE RAPE CAUSE SHE WAS DRUNK! NEJI ALWAYS SEEMS TO RAPE POOR HINATA! LEAVE HER BE!
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Orphen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story, and the announcements at the end of chap 4 were funny, too. 'tell my family I love them,', then fall asleep, classic!
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Title: Umm... it's me, the author
Reviewed By: shine_nagai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 03:54 CST
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Bad news, guys... my flashdisk is broken and WTF... chapter 5 is in there and i dont have any backups... will take a month for repairing it... sumanai.... Ah well, minna-san (Lotus_kajin,Anime Insaniac, Ryugenkotsu, VNAILLAfan, muffin_, and everyone who has read/going to read/has written Review, or going to write rev) i wanna say Thank You!!
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Reviewed By: Muffin_ (too lazy to log in) On: January 08, 2006 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woot I totally LOVE this story! So awesome, keep up and good work pleaseeee update soon!
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Reviewed By: VNAILLAfan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 22:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I do so hope you now Neji is Hinata's cousin.Thats the worst pair ever espeacially for er...that scene.That should have been Naruto,not Neji.PLZ MAKE A VERY EMOTIONAL NARUTO AND HINATA SCENE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryugenkotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 21:49 CST
Comment/Review:
nice fic. ease up on the japanese
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Title: Opinion
Reviewed By: Anime Insaniac On: December 03, 2005 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naruto probably wasn't aware of Hinata's birthday.And it's not like anyone can send a post to him telling him when Hinata's birthday is considering he's always moving around. Cousins being in an intimate relationship is not a good idea. Besides I like Naru/Hina the most anyway. Anyway update.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lotus Kajin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Hinata! I adore her so but the fic is great. I love both pairings but Naruto needs a good swift kick on that one! Please post more chapters soon. =3
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