| "Warm Afternoon." Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: YES.
Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer On: May 02, 2006 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap. This is one of the most heartfelt fics I've ever read. Plenty of good times and all that- well done. Don't worry about your spelling; you have a few odds and ends here and there, but I didn't notice them. And I'm a huge grammar nazi, mind you. All in all, it was a treat to read this. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: New Fan! On: May 01, 2006 03:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good Lord! That was the longest Lemon ever! Ten Chapters!? Geez. It was good though. I liked it.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 05:30 CDT
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If you're going to use a "drink" analogy to describe this story, I've got the perfect one. "Disaronno on the rocks." You all know the commercial I'm talking about. From one author to another, I find I have one word best suited for you. Bravo. As far as Inuyasha and/or Kagome acting out of character, how many of us have read the manga chapter or seen the anime episode in which they make love? Okay, thought so. No one knows how they would truly act but themselves, and that overlord Takahashi who won't tell us! *sigh* But, I digress. The point I wish to make is that you, my friend, have achieved literary greatness. I bow to you.
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 21:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it it was so good
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Title: wowee
Reviewed By: darkjewel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was certainly a fantastic read. Yow! I'm with razorbladesinner, I need to go wake up the hubby now.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: chichenoff On: December 21, 2005 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that has to be the best fic I have read in days! I really love this sweet and HOT fic. Please write more like this one or can you add more to it?
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Title: GReat!
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis was real good, did u write the poem urself? I gotta question are you going to finish that other fic w/ kags and sesshy? Me and my fiancee like that storee alot and we would preciate it if you finished you know? okay email me!
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Title: An Apology
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 16:33 CST
Comment/Review:
I want to apologize for my previous review. It was in no way constructive; it was just mean. There was no excuse for my behavior. I'm sorry.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 19:51 CST
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Kudos on your excellent parody of a 12 year old's idea of a lemon. I love the way Inuyasha is literally a driveling mouthbreather, talking big about sex. Then, this part is even funnier, Kagome actually realizes that Inuyasha is out of character! Sheer genius! I was laughing so hard I couldn't get past the second chapter.
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo On: December 12, 2005 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you made me blush, and I am married with pups. HeHe. You are doing a marvoulous job. You didn't make it dirty it was romantic and sweet yet a little naughty. Not only was the drink smooth but I think I want to go back and lick the glass clean. Write soon.
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Title: Hot Damn!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 16:46 CST
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QS, You've OUTDONE yourself!!! Thank you soooo much *Hugs you* This was simply awesome & i mean AWWEESSOOMMEE! I thought you took me to town with the prize, but this. Wow. A ten chapter lemon? If that's not the best xmas gift I've EVER gotten!!! WOOOOOT!!!! Well written, sweet & HAWT! Gracias por todo!!! xoxo, InuGrrrl
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner (nsi) On: December 12, 2005 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
GAH! Okay more than once I almost slid right out of my damn chair. Remember how I said that one chapter in The Prize was sensual overload....nuuh this one definately just took the cake. Now if you'll excuse me I have a male to go pounce on and "Wake up". :P awesome job, I
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