| "Reflections of You" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 23:12 CST
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I was surprised to see it end, but that was an endearing one. *smiles* oh man that little guy, Dutro, *shakes head* what a name, maybe they'll call him 'D' for short. And I'm so happy that one of them have Duo's eyes. I wonder if you thought of a continuation, Heero anmd Duo's life with the boys *smiles* And that's a really nice mental image - Heero, holding Miky while he wailed like a banshee in his arms and not giving into his fustration at not knowing what to do and giving him over to Duo but sticking with the little guy. *smiles*
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 19:13 CST
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i have a feeling that you got frustrated and got writer's block and just decided to end the fic, because that was way too rushed. i was liking it immensely until this chapter. i am not saying all stories have to have happy endings, but this left so many things loose and waving around that it was totally anticlimatic. i hope that maybe one day you decide to rewrite it and fix it, because it really was becoming a wonderful story. sorry i can't say anything more positive.
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Title: What? The End?
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 13:40 CST
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NOO! THERE MUST BE A SEQUEL! ::cough:: Sorry. It's good, it's be nice to have a little mench with how they grew up though. SL went on forever (wonderously so. That was quality) why can't this have a sequel. I'm not presenting my case very well. Oh buggers. Thanks for writing. Loved it.
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Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story, amazing plot, well-written and from one of my favourite authors ^_^ I think I've read just about all of your fics.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This totally rocks! So the boys are the sons of all of the pilots? That'll get complicated. I hope things turn out for them. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm so sorry that it took forever for me to review this chapter! I really love this story, but I just now managed to find the time to read it. Please keep going and update as soon as you can - I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 10:29 CST
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Wahoo!! He made it! I love that doc, he makes it more real and really brings to the readers attention just how strong Duo is to pull through considering the severity of the matter. gosh.... *shivers* when heero had basically chucked into the back seat of the doc's car like a bag of potatoes i was upset, scared that he could have worsen Duo's state through his careless manhandling. I guess I can understand how stressed he was in getting to the doc and getting out of there without being caught. But like in any mission there is a level of care that is to be considered when dealing with targets, I guess with his emotions all muddled- he was very conflicted...the life of their babies or Duo, and chances of having them both at the time seemed to be dwelding. BUT BOOOY am I glad that we didn't lose them both. haha man... I loved it when Scav called Duo a 'bitch of a mama,' that put to words my thoughts right away when Duo said if they weren't his or Heero's then they give them to the respective the 'parent'. Can't wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 00:57 CST
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*screams* Kracken!!! *huggles you while jumping up and down* Oh man...oh gosh.... Please gotta have more of it!!! This is fantastic!! I bursting with nervous energy for Duo and I wanna know what Heero's going to do. Oh man... update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 08:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!! i love your work and have been reading stuff on MM and on your own site.
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Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 10:39 CST
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Ooh... I've never liked the idea of male pregnancy, it completely squicks me out, if you'll excuse the slang ^^;; But I'm going to stick with this one, largely because, as DK_joy said, "I love it when Duo pulls stunts like that!" LOL I thought it was really cute when Duo said "Un-pregnant", and Heero corrected him. It's little things like that that make a fic truly great ^^ That's what I think, anyway. ~Sandy~
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 07:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is really cool! Please keep going! I love it when Duo pulls stunts like that! I just hope everything turns out OK in the end.
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