| "The Red Death" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: February 25, 2006 18:02 CST
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Oh sure end it there with a god awful okaa-san...geeze only Tsuki-sama sensai would do that..Damn....now you have gone and done it...I am now stuck sitting in my lonely corner waiting for you to update not one, not two, but three, yes three, stories...rubs eyes and stomps off muttering...Im going to go read a finished story...thats it...Im going to go read Brothers...yep at least I know thats finished...baka saia leaving me wanting, yearning for more updates...geeze....(was that a good temper tantrum or what...I think it was one of my best) laughs...catti
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: February 25, 2006 17:00 CST
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Falls unto her knees, screaming "Holy mother of God" what a fantastic chapter...must read more...catti (can I just say that I really hate mediaminer's review system, it sucks!) laughs..
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: February 25, 2006 16:20 CST
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Falls unto her knees, screaming "Holy mother of God" what a fantastic first chapter...must read more...catti
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Reviewed By: FreakofNature On: February 20, 2006 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Very impressive... Its one of the best fan fics I've ever read!
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Reviewed By: Ohagi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's awesome! I love the way it turns into that partly horror, partly mysterious kinda story. Great job! Keep it up! Until next time! Sayonara! - Ohagi-chan
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Reviewed By: paisita On: February 16, 2006 21:11 CST
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ok i'm definitely confuce, what is the thing with his mother is she really a walking decaying soul that is going to make their life a living hell????????? looking forward for the next ch
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Reviewed By: Zmyrra On: January 23, 2006 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love fics with somewhat original storylines, and you certainly fit the bill! This is a great idea. Just by making Kaoru a bit older than she is in canon you open up a ton of possibilites, and the whole spiritual connection-thing feels intriguing, rather than silly. Looking forward to the next chapter :D /Zmyrra
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Reviewed By: Dragon Rider Menoly [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 23:36 CST
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wow! i'm impressed with how much research you did on this subject for your story. from what i read it was extremely interesting and i love how you set up Kouru and Kensen. The feelings are almost tangible through the story. I got so caught up in it, i did't notice anything else around me.
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Reviewed By: paisita On: December 24, 2005 14:53 CST
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so they finaly meet, i'm happy for them, it was about time, the story is kind of sad but is what make's it ore realistic. hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: Samma On: December 24, 2005 03:29 CST
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I've been reading most of your works for the past few weeks--namely your RK fics. I must say, you're fast becoming one of my favorite authors. Between this and "The Black Hawk", I've been in fanfiction heaven. I'm eagerly waiting for more.
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Title: My Review (duh!)
Reviewed By: Hanabi jou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...That was...oh...what's the word for it? Magnificent! The way that you put it together. You took graceful steps! It just flowed easily and had a great plot. I can't say anything else, but ' I love it!'
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Reviewed By: paisita On: November 25, 2005 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow a new "baby" i love new stories, specially the ones that you wrote. now about the story well i love it, you describe everything with so much detail that i have me almost looking somewere else because of the great description of the assaciantions, at least something that is still hanging in my mind is when batoussai was cleaning his sword, god i swear i can take every aspect about the blood but when you added those two extra aspects of fat and bones ewwwwwwwwwwww grost, you remind me of a video that qe are washing in my anatomy class were the wer oppening a fat man stomach and then his hear to take out his brain..... ajajjajajaja.... anyway you know i love every story about you and i like this one a lot i read the one that wrote belladaynight it was interesting and sad, i guess this one is going to have a lot of anguish, i like those stories but onl if they have happy endings, i hate those that make me cry, bella almost make me cry with her story. hope to read something from you soon love you i hope you are good, take care paisita
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Title: visual...
Reviewed By: Ijin On: November 25, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved and was greatly enthrolled into the first two chapters of the stories. you might not know me but i'm the story thats above you...red fusion. its been a while since i read any new stories on this site because i've been so hung up on work and my own stories. but its good to be welcomed back with such brilliance such as this. i commend you on the rk story and i will continue to read and review any follow up chapters that are as well thought out as these are. -demonicpride32
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