| "The Ninja" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cute story, but honestly I don't think it belongs in the yaoi category. It's mostly het w/a little yaoi thrown in.
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Title: comment
Reviewed By: asialisek [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story initially, but i really wasn't prepared for an original character taking over a pairing with (in this case Sess)... you should include that in your summery. Please don't think I didn't enjoy the story up to that part, I did, and I like your style very much. It just.. it's a pet peeve of mine, but I think it's fair to warn readers that they'll stumble upon original/anime character mix. Some readers don't care, some readers stop reading when they hit that part. It's not fair to the rest of the story, really.. Please keep sharing your stories. n_n My suggestion is just to label them better. Thanks~
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Title: Woah!
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 21:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow Even better than the other story! I hope you keep writing more like this one (Not too much of a Yoai fan though). P.S. I hope you keep Kai in other fanfics or her kids.
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Reviewed By: chibi hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is original and it takes a lot of tallent to come up with your own character. This is one of the best original fanfics I have read so far.
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: sesshmarunaraku On: December 03, 2005 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please tell me that one of the pairs is sesshy/naraku.and please update soon
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: December 01, 2005 20:44 CST
Comment/Review:
aww! gotta love the tail. ;) so... what are the pairings?? i'm really curious! i know this is in yaoi... but who?
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