| "Lead the Way 2: Vegeta's turn" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Littlekely [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luvd it
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Vegetachick98 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 14:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
like the stories very sexy!
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Reviewed By: PINAS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 22:04 CST
Comment/Review:
MY GOD YOU SHOULD FREAKING WRITE ANOTHER ONE!!!!!!!!
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Title: very creative!
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally someone writing about Vegeta being totally clueless about sex! You did an awesome job conveying it, especially with the 'mixing DNA' that Bulma came up with. I can't wait to see if they really DO mix DNA. Please update! Believe it or not reading this inspired me on my Taste of Heat story in a good way.
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Reviewed By: DaNay4422 On: November 28, 2005 22:40 CST
Comment/Review:
excellent story! Please continue! I'm very interested to see how Vegeta responds to getting pleasure...
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